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Indigo - Part XII

Tuesday, March 8, 2011

Maya. Post-BDM. Simon operates on Hank, and things are seen from Mal's point of view. NEW CHAPTER

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In contrast to the almost frenetic activity of the previous few minutes – Mal driving the mule into Serenity’s cargo bay, Freya ready with a stretcher to transfer Hank into the infirmary, Simon and River removing the pilot’s clothes as quickly as possible – the next hour seemed to move through treacle.

Simon was fully prepared to have to order Zoe out of the cool blue room, but was surprised to realise she was nowhere to be seen. “Where –”

“With Ben,” his sister said quietly, pulling on a pair of white latex gloves.

“Of course.”

River knew, and still didn’t say, that Bethie and Ethan had the other children in her room, but Ben needed his mother right now, just as much as she needed him.

Mal helped take off Hank’s armour, idly wondering what would have happened to his pilot if he hadn't been wearing it, considering, then stepped back.

“You need me,” he murmured to Freya as she removed as much of the blood from Hank’s chest as she could, “you just yell.”

“I will,” she responded just as quietly, concentrating on not disturbing the flowering of emergency foam bandage that emerged from the wound.

It’s bad, isn’t it? he thought carefully.

It’s not good. She glanced up into his face. “He’ll be fine, Mal,” she said, giving the lie easily.

He understood. Thinking was one thing – she never lied in her thoughts to him – but maybe saying it aloud would make it true.

“Ready?” Simon asked, looking from River to Freya, visually checking the bags of blood, saline and other supplies ready for use.

They both nodded, but it was River who said, “Ready, ge-ge .”

He took a deep breath, then used a scalpel to open an incision alongside the solid foam.

Mal watched for a good long while, as always quietly amazed at his luck in having such a man as Simon Tam on his crew. Without him he didn't doubt that most of them would be the worse off, quite possibly dead, and while things had happened because of his presence that had changed all their lives, at least for the most par

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Tuesday, 08 March 2011 20:41
Wow. That was really good, with the surgery and the talking, and Mal's reaction to hearing how life has hardened his own kids.
Wednesday, 09 March 2011 01:34
I loved this though I was holding my breath while Simon was operating on Hank. I hadn't expected him to be that seriously injured given that he was wearing the vest. Every bit was great, the part between Mal and Ethan, and Zoe and then the Maya goodness at the end. I like how well Frey knows Mal and how River drops thoughts into their heads too. All of it is good, very shiny Thanks! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Wednesday, 09 March 2011 01:55
I always like the way your Mal is around his kids. Ethan here is just wonderfully his daddy. As for Hank, I am glad Simon is as talented as he is. And he best be okay....
Wednesday, 09 March 2011 03:17
This was great - all your characters were spot on and loved Mal's moralizing over Ethan's childhood on Serenity. Glad Zoe realized that the Black is the safest place for them all - I hate it when the band breaks up. Loved your grumpy Jayne! Your writing is as dynamic as ever.

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