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HANDFUL OF STARS: 21. "The Enemy Within"

Saturday, February 19, 2011

"Mal wakes to find some of his crew have not returned and plans a Big Damn Rescue. Meanwhile, Zoe hears something that makes her blood boil but is powerless to do anything about it."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4346    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "THE ENEMY WITHIN"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: None.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: Sequel to "ENEMY HANDS".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: None. All Firefly stories archived at Fireflyfans.net

SUMMARY: "Mal wakes to find some of his crew have not

returned and plans a Big Damn Rescue. Meanwhile, Zoe

hears something that makes her blood boil but is powerless

to do anything about it."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"THE ENEMY WITHIN"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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There were voices. Hushed and kind'a talking on tip toe if he was any judge. Made him all manner of curious, so much so that he fought the lethargic drag against his senses like a deep sea diver trying to haul himself to the surface. At first nothing made sense, the words all warped and disconnected much like his brain pan, then slowly he found he could pick out bits of sentences. The little he could string together alarmed him so much he fought with everything he had to regain consciousness.

"It's been seven hours, Simon! I should've heard somethin' from Zoe."

Simon was having trouble thinking of anything to reassure Wash. His sister was with Zoe, Jayne and Shepherd Book. If something had gone wrong, if River was in danger, he would never forgive himself. Fortunately, Inara was still in the infirmary and it was her reassuring tone that caressed Mal's ear as he forced open eyes sticky from too much sleep.

"I'm sure everything is fine, Wash. Zoe would have contacted us otherwise."

"Comfortin' as that is supposed to be you do remember where they were goin'? I knew I should have stayed on Cheverell, stayed close at hand to get them outta there if things went bad."

"Wha...wha...w

Comments
Monday, 21 February 2011 13:51
Great story. I bet the crew carries the scars from this mess for a long time.
Monday, 21 February 2011 14:54
Why does that last line remind me of the A-Team? Everything *is* coming together, and Petrie's days are number in the very low figures. And I love Mal thinking about River's 'no' list and how it's getting a lot longer. That needs a fic all to itself!
Monday, 21 February 2011 22:31
Yes, Colt99, the crew will carry these scars for a long while to come. I did chuckle at you likening the last line to the A-Team, Jane0904. Could say it has a kind of poetry to it. Thanks for the shiny feedback, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 27 February 2011 14:30
Last line was great. I still loved the whole chapter again. As for Zoe and Book... guess I best read the next chapter to see just what they have discovered...
Sunday, 27 February 2011 21:56
Glad you loved it, Angellemarcs. Thanks for the shiny feedback, appreciated as always! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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