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HANDFUL OF STARS: 20. "Enemy Hands"

Tuesday, February 8, 2011

"Jayne awakes to find himself in some kind of dungeon. Book and Zoe discover new reasons to fear Petrie. Meanwhile Ritchie and Monty go to enlist the help of Old Man Ellis only to find themselves in unexpected trouble."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4394    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "ENEMY HANDS"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: None.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: Sequel to "HEROES AND HANDICAPS".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: None. All Firefly stories archived at Fireflyfans.net

SUMMARY: "Jayne awakes to find himself in some kind of

dungeon. Book and Zoe discover new reasons to fear

Petrie. Meanwhile Ritchie and Monty go to enlist the help of

Old Man Ellis only to find themselves in unexpected trouble."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"ENEMY HANDS"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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Jayne Cobb blinked, slightly stunned, his head slow to clear through the roaring in his ears. He rose carefully from where had woken on the cold floor, immediately noticing the loss of his weapons and the stone walls of his prison. He eyed the heavy metal door and groaned, letting his eyes close briefly as he tried to push passed the grogginess and the dull tympanic ache throbbing behind his eyes. Memory flooded back like one of those action replays you get on digital recordings. It didn't help his mood any realising they had been outsmarted.

He started to pace, anger simmering but trying to keep calm. Jayne tried to recall every last detail as they had approached the hidden entrance, the crack opening as if by magic. He remembered levelling Vera as the doorway appeared, about to discharge a spray of mechanised death just as an explosion lifted him off his feet throwing him backwards. He vaguely remembered the air boiling white with some kind of chemical dust that choked off his breath and stung his eyes. Within a second or two he lost consciousness. The next thing Jayne remembered was waking up here. The mercenary stopped pacing, it wasn't getting him a

Comments
Tuesday, 08 February 2011 21:33
'Lincoln James Petrie really was the Devil and she was looking right down into the fiery pit of Hell.' Great line!!

I loved the comments on Wash and his dinos... even though he didn't feel like playing with them.

This keeps getting good. One of the best you've written... keep it coming please.

Tuesday, 08 February 2011 23:22
Simon Tam gave her a dry look edged with disbelief. "Since when does the Captain need a reason?"

XD

The plot with the messenger is very interesting, also Ritchie, Ellis and Monty. Much concern for both crews.
Wednesday, 09 February 2011 12:56
Thank you for the shiny comments - always appreciated. A few twists and turns to come so hang on to your hats! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Wednesday, 09 February 2011 16:16
I trust Petrie will die slowly, but knowing our crew they'll kill him quick. Or maybe the messenger will have the chance. Great stuff, Ali. Great stuff.
Thursday, 10 February 2011 01:03
Thanks Jane0904. Petrie is some piece of work and no mistake. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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