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Indigo - Part IX

Wednesday, February 2, 2011

Maya. Post-BDM. Jayne decides to help Mallory as much as he can, and River tells Mal what she's found. NEW CHAPTER

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Mal caught up with Jayne halfway back to town, but only because the big guy had reined in his mount, letting the horse tear at a gorse bush.

“You okay?” he asked, doing the same and taking the opportunity to shift slightly in the saddle to a more comfortable position – it had been a while since he’d been on a horse, and there were parts of his anatomy that were beginning to complain.

“Someone was watching us,” Jayne said, without preamble.

Mal’s discomfort disappeared, and he was as serious as a Reaver attack. He didn’t even think to question the expert tracker’s statement. “Us? Or Mallory?”

“Can't tell. Caught a flash in the foothills behind the farm.”

“A scope?”

Jayne shrugged. “Figure that. Or long distance glasses.”

“Is that why you left in such an all-fire hurry?”

“Maybe I was just wanting to get home.”

“And maybe you were worrying about Mallory getting in the middle of something,” Mal said astutely.

“Her and her boy didn’t kill Indigo, so if someone’s gunning for us, she doesn’t deserve to be anywhere near it.”

“You sure about Josh? He handled that rifle better than most kids his age.”

Jayne knew Mal wasn’t honestly suggesting Josh killed anyone – he was just playing devil’s advocate so that all the options didn’t colour the facts. “Nah. He wouldn’t’a shot you, least not on purpose.”

“That’s nice to know.” Mal’s voice was drier than the Sihnon desert. “And if he thought your pal was threatening his Ma?”

“Indigo weren’t like that.”

“You don’t know. It’s been as long since you saw him.”

“He might’ve done stuff another man’d be ashamed of – if that other man wasn’t me – but he never abused a woman as I’m aware of.” He shook his head. “Josh didn’t shoot Indigo. I’d bet my life on it.”

“Hey, I was the one at the end of the gun.”

Jayne had to smile. “As if that was something you ain’t used to.”

Mal’s own mouth twitched. “More’n once, Jayne, more’n once.” He pulled his horse away from the scrub, turning his head back towards town. “Come on.

Comments
Thursday, 03 February 2011 01:48
Loved your River as always, and glad you are still wrenching this storyline out of your muse.
Thursday, 03 February 2011 14:30
Jayne and Mal could almost be brothers,its awesome how you have developed their relationship.And River at the end was just awesome.
Thursday, 03 February 2011 23:22
I just love your MAYA, Jane0906, but I am also very much enjoying how you are writing Mal and Jayne. And any scene with the children in it just turns me to goo. Looking forward to more soon, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Friday, 04 February 2011 02:31
Heh. I remember that one shot with the whorehouse and the cousins...

Something tells me that broken water pump may be sinister.
Saturday, 05 February 2011 18:20
I always have loved your River. And I agree with the group. Your Jayne and Mal is just great. Definitely brothers with another mother... ;)

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