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HANDFUL OF STARS: 14. "Possum"

Sunday, December 5, 2010

"The messenger finds Serenity gone. Monty discovers that his friend did not abandon him and Simon pulls out all the stops to undo what Petrie did to the Captain."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4212    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "POSSUM"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: None.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: Sequel to "A CUNNING PLAN".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: None. All Firefly stories archived at Fireflyfans.net

SUMMARY: "The messenger finds Serenity gone. Monty

discovers that his friend did not abandon him and Simon pulls

out all the stops to undo what Petrie did to the Captain."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"POSSUM"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

"I have to stay."

Simon shook his head. "River, I need to stop the Captain's heart."

"His body will be asleep but his mind will be awake."

"The Captain may actually die, River. He won't be sleeping."

The girl nodded to show she understood what her brother was saying, her eyes wide round pools too deep to fathom. Did Simon actually not think she knew the risk? "Body, yes. Brain takes minutes to die. He'll panic, Simon. No one able to hear him, reach him, manage the fear. Instinct - ancient, primodial and desperate will take over."

He tried a different tack. "We still don't know if this will work, *mei mei*."

"Have to try or he'll be lost forever."

Simon nodded reluctantly, she was right. To take no action at all would leave the Captain locked in his own body and powerless to stop whatever evil machinations his tormenter had planned for him. If they did not act, Malcolm Reynolds might never regain consciousness again. "You should still wait outside."

"Needs me, Simon. I will be his compass."

He looked to his right where Zoe stood like some silent sentinel, her back ramrod straight. "If we're gonna do this best we make a start."

"Right, *dang ran*."

The doctor scrubbed up then checked hi

Comments
Sunday, 05 December 2010 23:38
Girl... what are you doing to me? This is soooo good. I love the gut wrenching drama between River and Mal... him trying to remember who she is and River getting flustered. I also love the way you have Simon... extremely dedicated. As for Monty, he's quite an interesting character. :) MORE PLEASE!
Monday, 06 December 2010 13:36
Wonderful. Simon's intensity, Mal's pain and River's distress ... brilliantly written. And I can't wait to see if the messenger finally does for Petrie!
Monday, 06 December 2010 18:47
Good stuff, liked Wash's thoughts on how they rely on Mal to Captain.

Glad Simon was able to relieve Mal from his suffering, intense scene, by the way, with River reading his anguish and Mal thinking he was in river water, back on Shadow.
Thursday, 16 December 2010 17:02
Kept me at the edge of my seat! Whew! Thanks, Simon, for getting the Captain through that! *grin* And River too, of course!

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