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Indigo - Part IV

Saturday, September 25, 2010

Maya. Post-BDM. Jayne talks about Indigo, and Mal makes a decision. NEW CHAPTER (please forgive the delay in my posting - real life and all that ...)

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Indigo MacCready. Nobody knew if Indigo was his real name, or just something somebody on some moon had christened him with because of the number and variety of his tattoos, but that’s what everyone called him, from the women in his bed to the men at the end of his guns. He wore two pistols, slung low on his hips, the leather of the holsters slightly greasy from constant use. He never told anyone when he was born, but he looked the kind of man who’d reached his forties and just stayed there. He could have been sixty, and nobody could tell the difference, although it was probably nearer to the latter since Jayne had met him more than nearly thirty years before.

The ex-mercenary settled back in his chair at the table, and sighed. “Like I said, he was the man who taught me how not to get dead. Which wasn’t easy. There’re times I think I was greener than the doc here when I left Ezra, working my passage on anything that’d have me, doing pretty much anything, including cleaning the bilges on a regular basis.”

Simon didn’t bother to complain – it wasn't like Jayne was being deliberately insulting, just giving in to the habit. Still, the look on his face was slightly pained, although that eased when Kaylee slipped her hand into his.

“So you weren’t a gunhand in the beginning,” Zoe said slowly.

“Nah. I was hardly old enough to shave, let alone be taken seriously. It took a year or two before I filled out to match my height, and I was nineteen before I actually worked as a merc.” He shook his head. “Nearly didn’t make it to twenty,” he admitted. “Blind luck … and Indigo.”

“How?” Mal asked.

“You mean how’d I meet him?” Jayne actually smiled. “We was on the wrong side of each other, and his partner at the time was all for killing me, just to make a point. Indigo persuaded him not to, saying it was pro-fessional courtesy. Anyway, they got the loot, I got tossed, and was down to my uppers when Indigo walked back into the saloon I was drowning my sorrows in.” He paused a moment. “I do

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Saturday, 25 September 2010 16:27
“He sounds … magnanimous,” Simon murmured.

“Not sure about that,” Jayne admitted, “but he taught me everything he knew, and then some.”

“That’s pretty much what I meant.”

“Oh. Then, yeah. What you said.” (hee hee. Poor Jayne and his failure at big words)


It was so good. I am very intrigued by Jayne's mentor. Sounds alot like the old Jayne. My favorite scene though must be the end with Maoli. Reminded me of another 'cat' we all love.

*looks around to make sure Bat at listening* Anyway....awesome job and can't wait for more...
Saturday, 25 September 2010 20:39
Wow, another story so soon! This is going to be interesting. What did Jayne's dream mean, that Indigo wasn't dead or he wasn't murdered?
Monday, 27 September 2010 02:01
I love the way you have developed individual characteristics for each of your psychics....its not simply "hey they read minds"

Freya is the empath, her presence and power are mostly rooted in her connections with others, and Ethan developing along simliar lines here with the sensing more of emotions than direct thoughts...

River is the virginal Delphic Oracle crossed with the classic crone seer. She sees the possibilities and the cracks between what is and what could be, perceiving more of the verse than just about anyone else could even imagine...and has to handle all that with a brain damaged by crual hands.

and Bethie, little Bethie...so much power, so much responsibility, having all the world and all its emotions thrust on her far earlier than even she could possibly be able cope with. Shes gonna be the most powerful of all, and the cost will be so high for her...

Ethan's conversation with Freya is just priceless here. You write both him and Bethie as so advanced that it becomes difficult to keep track of how old they are, but they are just so spot on for intelligent kids, with that clear and simple view of the world they have.

Sometimes i think that if any network ever did get their hands on the rights for Firefly....5, 6 maybe even more seasons of shows have already been written for them.

In my mind, your version of the verse is "how it was" as Mal would say
Friday, 01 October 2010 17:07
You have such a brilliant Jayne voice and I liked it that Mal wouldn't let him go alone, after all as Frey says he is family. I am wondering if maybe Indigo isn't dead and the dream is a warning to be sharper and keep a lookout, things not being what they seem. Another terrific chapter, *xie xie ni*, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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