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Indigo - Part II

Thursday, September 2, 2010

Maya. Post-BDM. The crew discuss the events at the entertainment complex, and Jayne gets mail. NEW CHAPTER

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“We really want to do that job?” Freya asked, picking up a small vase on one of the stalls, turning it over to see what was written underneath then putting it back, much to the disgust of the bored owner.

“It’s a job. It’s marginally legal.”

“And we’ve got cash saved if we need it.”

Mal knew what she was doing. He'd refused to let her open the package from Alex, saying she’d enjoy it that much more back on the ship, adding that the best was always worth waiting for. He was still limping slightly from the kick she’d given him, and now she was annoying him by dawdling. He was prepared to let her get away with it, at least for a while. “That’s not for now.”

“Besides, Bigsby was ogling.”

“What?”

“He was trying to see down my shirt.”

“Frey, honey, he's too scared of you to do that. Besides, he couldn’t keep his eyes off the women in the bar.”

“Are you saying they’re better looking than I am?” she asked, turning to look at him.

“Is it gonna be one of those days?” he asked in turn. “The kind where no matter what I say I'm wrong?”

She stuck her chin out. “Yes.”

“Fine. Just so’s I know.” He sighed, shaking his head. “So if I say you’re the most beautiful woman I’ve ever met, and there ain’t a one of those silicone enhanced bodies that claim my attention for even a moment, I'm lying?”

“Are you?”

“You gonna answer a question with a question?”

“What if I am?”

He couldn’t help it. He laughed. Probably not the best thing to do, especially if she really was annoyed with him, but luckily she smiled instead. “Frey, honey, you know I ain’t got eyes for anyone else. And there’s a whole host of men out there who think you’re pretty special, and I include sly ones at that. So don’t go getting yourself all … discombobulated over nothing, dong mah ?”

“I don’t think I’ve ever been combobulated,” she said thoughtfully. “So I'm not sure how I go about being the opposite.”

“Don’t. It’s painful.”

“You’ve had the practice?”

“I surely have. I doubt there’s much

Comments
Thursday, 02 September 2010 12:55
Yay for River's mad hacking skills. And boo for the Purple bellies still trying to find kids to torture.

Looking to be a wild ride yet again.
Thursday, 02 September 2010 14:12
Now that's a way of finding prey to corrupt. Does the Alliance stop at nothing?! Wonderfully written, though know there is more to come that will make me wear down my fingernails...let the biting begin...

and I loved the few lines at the start. Makes it seem like a real relationship, not one that is always wine and roses.
Thursday, 02 September 2010 14:16
"Say Nite Nite" ROFL

beat up windmills is an awesome reference too, great work, as usual.

Can you ghostwrite some fics for me so I can look this talented?

JK, loving this story...especially how this specific threat triggers some of River's darkness
Thursday, 02 September 2010 16:49
Yep. And all of the stuff about slaves can be fully collaborated by information in the series.

As a side note, *freaked* you're in my head, my heaaaaad...!
Thursday, 02 September 2010 17:38
I am so glad that our BDHs got the children out of the kidnapping trap but am I the only one suspicious about the job and the crates they picked up? I know some things really are just coincidental but I think I would want River or Frey to try to get a read on their contents just to be sure. Having the children in danger makes me jumpy. Loved the notion of Mal tilting at windmills. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Thursday, 02 September 2010 19:45
It would have been nice If Jayne had killed them and rather painfully.This sounds really angsty ,I hope not too much when the children are involved.Great chapter as always !
Thursday, 02 September 2010 21:20
Great work as always. Looking forward to more.
Friday, 03 September 2010 01:13
I always love your story within a story within a story. No matter how much I think I know where you're going, you always end up someplace else. Wonderfully written as always, and just enough of a mystery here and there to keep us all guessing.

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