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Quest - Chapter 30

Monday, August 30, 2010

Back after a long hiatus. The SLA tries to attack the Alliance Embassy in Boston. They just didn't figure on River and Rachel.

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Disclaimer: Joss, Fox, Universal Own em’. I’m just playing. No money being made. The situations come from my own twisted mind as do my original characters.

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AN: This chapter is kinda short. And it only took me since April to write it. I seem to have lost focus with my Allanverse series. I think that this will be the concluding arc. I should be able to wrap things up next chapter.

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Quest - Chapter Thirty

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Zoë stood in the entrance to the embassy kitchen watching as her husband and daughter put the finishing touches on breakfast for everyone. A huge stack of pancakes, a pan full of scrambled eggs, sausage and the rest. She cleared her throat.

“Mornin, Mom,” Sara smiled.

Zoë stepped into the room and kissed her husband before hugging Sara, “Mornin. Kinda looks like the old days in here.”

“Sara and I making breakfast?” Allan asked.

“Yep,” Zoë agreed.

“Allan. What are doing, cooking? You are a guest!” Trudy stated firmly as she walked into the kitchen, Robert at her heels.

“Sara's idea,” Allan grinned.

“Daddy!. Don't you go blamin me for your idea,” Sara replied.

Allan chuckled, “Guess I've been found out. Better round everyone up. It's ready.”

The smell emanating from the kitchen quickly drew Simon and Kaylee along with Clay and Becca. Rosie and Owen were noticeably absent.

“Where's Owen and Roseanne?” Allan asked as he sat at the table.

Becca snickered, “Still sexin I think.”

Simon shot his daughter a glare while Clay just rolled his eyes. Kaylee grinned, “We'll save em' some. Like to be hungry.”

“Probably,” Sara agreed, “Now Dad.... what's the deal with Altair?”

As they ate, Allan filled his daughter in about the deal he had forged with Altair Shipbuilding. A deal that would make Sara and Becca very wealthy in their own right. As the inventors of the First Generation FTL drive system.

Sara was already wealthy. Both from her trust fund and her own patents. Not to mention being Allan's daughter. Becca wasn't nearly as well off as Sar

Comments
Monday, 30 August 2010 22:00
Please don't write off the Allanverse. Even if it goes on the backburner, I like it too much to loose it. But it's your creation, and whatever you put down on the page - or screen - I'll read.
Monday, 30 August 2010 23:08
Agree with Jane, don't lose this. It's way too good. I love the original characters in this verse almost as much as I love the ones from the show. :)
Wednesday, 01 September 2010 16:57
I have to make it a clean sweeeeep.. What ever endevor you choose to continue, I would feel like something was missing if the Allanverse ended. I too feel that this is good enough to be, if not a major motion picture, then a reserection of a well known and loved series. AND.. While I hate to play the guilt card.. you DO have a responsibility to feed the addiction of the fans you have ensnared. SO.. with an optomistic attitude, I look forward to reading much more Allanverse ARC's in the future, albeit, less frequently than your other fine and familiar works.
Whew.. verbose aint I??

As always.. Yes Please!! May we have another??
KAS
Sunday, 05 September 2010 16:11
You have created something special here. Please do NOT let it die!

As a side note, I've appended all of the AllenVerse series into a single file on my ebook reader and enjoy visiting there most every day.

There are very, very few stories I can say that about. Congratulations!

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