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HOPE SERIES: 22. "Paying Debts"

Monday, August 30, 2010

"Not everything goes according to the gorram plan."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3644    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "PAYING DEBTS"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Simon/Kaylee.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: Sequel to "THE PLAN". SERIES CONCLUSION.

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: None. All Firefly stories archived at Fireflyfans.net

SUMMARY: "Not everything goes according to the gorram plan."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"PAYING DEBTS"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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"Sir?"

"Hmmm?"

"You're bleedin', sir."

"Just a scratch."

"I can see bone."

"Don't fuss, Zoe, we won."

"You need a medic."

"Don't got one."

"Simon..."

"Is back on Serenity."

For a moment neither of them spoke. Zoe, probably because she was trying to keep her temper and the Captain possibly influenced by blood loss. Really. There were times when the man's stubborn orneriness was beyond funny. It was Jayne lumbering through the fine sand and raising his own personal duststorm that roused them out of their respective funks.

"What ya hangin' about for?"

The Captain blinked as he stared at the mercenary but his words were for his second in command. "I pass out?"

"No, sir."

"You seein' a mirage, Zoe?"

"No, sir. That really is Jayne."

It took a minute for the Captain to marshall the energy to yell at the man. "What part of stay on Serenity did you not understand?"

"Got bored." Jayne paused, his eyes beginning to narrow as he spotted the widening gyre of blood soaking through the Captain's right thigh along with something suspiciously white and jagged poking through. "Thought you might need some extra fire power an' I was right." The big man's eyes widened in surprise and disbelief. Disbelief turned to outrage as if the whole situation were the Captai

Comments
Monday, 30 August 2010 14:31
It's been a long time coming but here is the conclusion. I also decided to give the stories a series title to help folk navigate the listings. Thank you to everyone who had kindly commented on my stories. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Monday, 30 August 2010 16:08
Had to slip back to the previous chapter. This is just great. I loved the way it ended. I always loved Hope and I love the ending here with Mal and Hope and the pie. We need more from you. I miss reading your stuff.
Monday, 30 August 2010 19:09
Aww. Yay.
Monday, 30 August 2010 22:08
Welcome back, Ali. And with a great chapter, not least with Patience finally getting her just desserts! And Zoe's reply to Mal's 'you killed her'? Priceless.
Friday, 03 September 2010 03:29
Nice to see a happy ending to this story. Glad to see you back.
Friday, 03 September 2010 03:30
Nice to see a happy ending to this story. Glad to see you back.
Monday, 13 February 2012 01:25
Thanks for all the shiny feedback! It is always appreciated, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 04 August 2013 00:24
the Mal/Zoe interplay after he gets shot and Jayne shows up is just perfection, really. Love all of your shiny fics, AliD, xie xie

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