Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Interludes: Making Mischief

Thursday, May 27, 2010

Maya. Post-BDM. Third in the short series. River and Hank discuss jobs, and Mal thinks on paternity. NEW

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There was something about it. The way it seemed to go on forever, unchanging and inviolate.

She shook her head, frowning slightly. Hyperbole. Using two words where one would do. Redundancy. Using two words that meant the same. Did that mean they cancelled each other out? Was space collapsing around her, and she would wink out of existence, at the same time as expanding back to infinity in an unending oscillation? Or –

“Gorramit!”

River looked around at Hank, standing in the doorway, his hands on his hips, his untidy brown hair lifted indignantly. She was surprised how well it matched the expression on his face.

“Hello,” she said, smiling at him.

“No.” He raised a hand, shaking a finger at her. “No. You don’t go saying hello. Not when we’ve talked about this.”

“Talked about what?” She widened her eyes.

“You know exactly.” His thumb jerked. “Out.”

“Ah.” She slid from the pilot’s chair and shimmied into the other.

“Better.” Sitting down on his rightful throne, Hank scanned the board automatically, reaching out to correct a warning light. But she was quicker, her hand almost a blur. “Dammit, River!”

She was immediately contrite. “Sorry.”

“’Cept you aren’t, are you, else you wouldn’t do it.”

She stared down at her bare feet, lifting them up to perch on the edge of the seat, as if trying to make herself as inconspicuous as possible. “Sorry,” she said again, her voice even more so.

He felt like a heel. “Look, River, it’s what I do.” She still wasn’t looking at him, her face hidden behind her curtain of hair. He went on, “I can’t shoot to save my life, not like you and Jayne, or anyone else on this ship, pretty much. And my stitching’s so bad I'm not gonna threaten Simon. As for the engine room ...” He paused. “Well, maybe I can hold my own there, but nowhere near Kaylee’s skills. But you and Frey, you’re always up here, wanting to fly.”

“We like it,” she pointed out, flexing her toes to a perfect ballet point before lifting her head to gaze at him. “A

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Thursday, 27 May 2010 13:16
"No. I am grounded. My feet are in the earth, toes grasping tree roots, even as my head is in the clouds." This reminds me of one of the first verse of one of my favorite songs.. "I am the Goddess. My feet are rooted. Deep within the earth. My head among the stars. My crown the Universe." :) I am so happy you posted this. I really liked seeing Hank get kinda bent out of shape that Freya and River want to do his job. It's cute.
Thursday, 27 May 2010 16:39
And I loved the end....

“There gonna be blood? Entrails?”

“I hope not.” She was on her feet in a flash, off the bridge even quicker.

“if there is, you can clean it up,” he called after her, but if she heard she didn’t reply.

I can so see this going on. At least the y are close to the infirmary in case anything bad happens. LOL!
Thursday, 03 June 2010 14:12
This is cute. :)

I can see Hank's point, but I also don't see the harm in letting River fly. She likes it, and I can't imagine she'll ever be as good as Hank at, say complicated evasive maneuvers, being that's an ingrained intuitive pilot thing. The only thing to watch out for is if she's a little bit loopy at the time and runs them into an asteroid.

But ah well, that's also Hank's place, and he probably doesn't want anyone messing with it. I bet Wash was huffy about people touching his dinosaurs, too, I've heard that he was pretty fussy about the pilots chair (or at least Alan was). The chair and spot, the role, the niche. Claimed.
Wednesday, 01 September 2010 16:35
Lovely. There is always such a nice energy between River and Mal and you capture it so well. Loved Hank being grumpy to start with on finding River commandeering his rightful place then relenting somewhat. These stories are like a set of well worn and much loved clothes. The fit is perfect. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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