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Fishing

Monday, April 19, 2010

Technically Maya. Post-BDM. One of my occasional forays into Young Mal territory. An eighteen year old sits by the creek, trying to fish. STANDALONE. And yes, Masks will be coming - my muse is just taking a holiday!

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The midges were biting, even if the fish weren’t. Not that it mattered. The whole point of fishing, as far as Mal could see, was to have time to do it. Just sit. Quietly. Waiting. And if a man didn’t catch anything, well … it just got away, is all. Everyone knew about those fish. Too big. Vicious. Lots of teeth. That kinda thing.

He grinned. Yeah, he sure liked fishing.

The sun was dropping towards the Wraiths, the mountains that pretty much ringed this part of Shadow, and it would soon be time to head on back to the ranch. His Ma was cooking steak tonight, as a celebration, and he didn’t want to miss it. He felt mildly guilty that he hadn't been there to destring the beans or peel the potatoes, but she’d told him to go off and enjoy himself, seeing as his last day at school had ended midday.

Eighteen. A man, by any anybody’s standards. Except maybe his Ma’s. He’d always be Malcolm, her little boy. And truth was, he didn’t really mind all that much. Long as she kept it indoors and didn’t embarrass him.

He absently stroked the silver cross hanging around his neck. She’d given it to him on his birthday a couple of months back, telling him as she fastened the chain that it had belonged to her mother, and hers, and hers ... so far back it was said it came with the original settlers from Earth-that-was, although nobody knew for sure. He’d tried not to take it, saying it was hers, but she’d insisted. If her and his Pa had been blessed with a daughter, it would have gone to her, but as Malcolm was an only child ... She swatted his hands away when he tried to take it off.

Mal sighed. A man. That’s what he was. With the summer stretched out ahead of him, looking forward to working the cattle, learning the business from the ground up, until he’d be able to take over one day. But for now, he was content just to sit quietly and wait for something else to bite.

“Mal!”

Except he wasn’t going to be able to sit quietly. He looked over towards the road, seeing Dugan and Kyle waving

Comments
Monday, 19 April 2010 23:16
Lovely as always. It shows truly what Mal lost in the war. And what he gained afterward... eventually.
MALXOXOINARA
Monday, 19 April 2010 23:34
I've been reading your MAYA stories for (I think) over three years now. I find every single one unique and absolutely wonderful. For a while now, I've been saying I should comment and never got around to it, but I'm finally doing so.

If nothing else, the quote about holding on to your friends struck me very hard. I'm only 22 and still probably don't know a whole lot about life but with things that have happened in my life recently, I found that quote utterly true.

So, thank you for writing this piece, as well as the many others on here and over on Fanfiction.net (I read and adore your Castle stuff too). I can't wait to read more.
Tuesday, 20 April 2010 00:43
*sniff* Simply wonderful.
Tuesday, 20 April 2010 01:31
Wonderfully descriptive and visual as always. Sigh. I could almost feel the breeze and the sunshine. Leave it to Mal to still be the practical one. Glad Simon has learned a few things about asking Mal a direct question.
Tuesday, 20 April 2010 02:23
This is definitely something I could see both young Mal and older Mal doing. I love the friend's talk and the way you made sure we knew what happened to them. Great work.
Tuesday, 20 April 2010 04:45
That is pretty. Something honest, and true.
Tuesday, 20 April 2010 04:46
As in real, like it should fit in the series, like a scene wasn't ever filmed.
Tuesday, 20 April 2010 21:09
You always know just how to say something. Beautifully written as always. When I read your stories, your Maya world I get so involved and I can "see" what's going on.
Monday, 30 August 2010 19:17
Love this glimpse back into Mal's past on Shadow and nice to have that talk with Simon towards the end. Ali D :~)
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