Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Photo Finish

Monday, February 15, 2010

A cute, kinda sexy story for Valentine's Day. Written as a mutual challenge, with my boyfriend Cuda77 writing a related story based on one of the same plot points. He recently got a very nice Mal-style Browncoat. Of course, we had to take some... pictures... of me in it, with a very few Kaylee-type accoutrements. This led us to thinking; wouldn’t these pictures form the basis of an amusing Kaylee/ Mal fic? We both had different ideas of how it should go, so we set ourselves the challenge of each writing our stories up, and posting them for Valentine’s Day.

I also had a different ending in mind, but I think this one is better for V-Day. I will post my alternate ending, which I actually like better, tomorrow. Let’s call it “Photo Finish 2.0” so you can tell ‘em apart. Happy Valentine’s day to you all, and I hope you enjoy this short sweet story.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1957    RATING: 0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“Kaylee!” Mal sauntered into the mess, late as usual to the meal that everyone else had already begun. His arms were wrapped around each other in their red sleeves for warmth but not so tightly that he looked, you know, cold. He glowered in a big-brotherly way at the girl. “You figure out why we're goin' on three days of chilly on my ship?”

Jayne sniggered a manly snigger down into his plate of protein chow. “ 'Cause that's what come after two days of chilly...” he sassed, loudly enough for the Captain to hear him but softly enough Mal could pretend to miss it. He grinned an evil little boy's grin as the spoon in his fist shoveled another mass of gruel into his face. The whole situation had a mighty entertainment to it.

His young mechanic had looked up with a start, an innocently guilty look on her smudged face, spoon halfway to her mouth. “ Oh! Cap'n... I...” she glanced quickly around at the rest of the crew for reassurance. “I haven't found a thing wrong with Serenity . She's sayin' nothin to me but that she's fit as a fiddle.” She continued to look to Mal for his judgment.

“The life support's fit, is it?” Mal asked, as he sat, hunched over, and pulled some food to him. She nodded a quick wide-eyed affirmation. He continued, “I mean... and just how do you all sit here in your shirt sleeves calmly eating?”

His second in command Zoe answered carefully, “Well, Captain, I'm not finding it especially uncomfortable myself, so I can't say I exactly know what you mean.” She looked at him levelly, and pleasantly.

Her full lips barely twitched as everyone else made “no, I'm fine, it's only a tiny bit cool to me” noises while her husband Wash piped cheerfully up with “Well, Honey, I am doing my best to keep you warm,” and pulled her close to him. She mockingly shoved him back to his place, and the smirk widened into a true smile.

Jayne pointed his spoon at Mal, still grinning just enough to not get himself into trouble. “Ya know, if yer gonna be a pussy about the cold, why doncha jus

Comments
Monday, 15 February 2010 17:30
I think the other fic provides some perspective on this one, since this seems to be before the pilot episode. And, well, it's not like he's completely incapable of a one night stand (Nandi). Though he kind of is closed off and not really inclined to let people in or let himself be vulnerable, so he tries to sidestep invitation until he just can't resist anymore. He might "roll" with a member of the crew simply cause he's human and could only hold out so long if an offer kept being made, but I think it'd take a significant amount of face-to-face seduction (like Saffron did, naked and practically throwing herself at him) to override his better senses. Especially since he thinks shipboard relationships are pure bad news.

I'm going the squeaky clean route and saying he's going to sneak down, steal back his coat while Kaylee's sleeping, and steal something of hers too as retaliation. He is a thief, after all!
VESHENGRI
Monday, 15 February 2010 19:57
I could definitely see it going that way, too. :) After a *looong* cold shower, if Serenity has such things. :)

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