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Masks - Part XIII

Sunday, January 10, 2010

Maya. Post-BDM. Jez's son, Flynn, makes an appearance, and the girls enjoy a mud bath. NEW CHAPTER

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At the tender age of fifteen, before she’d ever met Noah Thacker, or dreamed fitfully of becoming a Browncoat and owning her own boat, Jezebel Youngblood did what her family considered the ultimate sin – she fell in love. And worse still (if there can be a worse after the ultimate sin) she became pregnant.

Her father ranted and raved, her mother looked at her with something like disappointment in her eyes, while Jez stood in the centre of the Sihnon-weave carpet, her hands held tightly in front of her still-flat stomach, the natural stoicism of her heritage about the only thing keeping her from falling apart.

“You’ll never see him again,” her father insisted.

“I love him.”

If anything her father’s face congested even more. “Love?” he scoffed. “What do you know about love? You’re a child.”

“I’m going have his baby.”

Her own mother put her hand to her mouth and ran from the room.

Her father glared at her. “Now look what you’ve done.”

“Alan loves me. We’re going to be together.”

“You think?” He stopped in his pacing. “Do you really think he’s going to want to be tied down to a wife and child at his age?”

“Yes.” She gazed at him, her stubbornness radiating from every pore, as sure in her love as she was in the world turning. “He loves me,” she repeated.

Unfortunately, her father was right. As much as Alan denied it, he was heir to the family fortune, and no matter that the Youngbloods had money, it wasn’t old, and to the Tennysons that was all that was important. He was shipped off to the family estate on Londinium, and in barely a month the engagement was announced between him and the youngest daughter of … Jez couldn’t read any more. She closed the Cortex link and rolled up into a ball on her bed, her heart breaking.

Shortly after her sixteenth birthday, Jez was delivered of a healthy baby boy, his lungs announcing that he wasn’t happy to be thrust into the cold, cruel world. She named him Flynn.

For six months she fed, changed and otherwise did for her son, lea

Comments
Sunday, 10 January 2010 15:22
So good....thought mental talents can get you in trouble....:) I like Flynn. He is quite a character!! NO killing him! :)
Sunday, 10 January 2010 16:46
I love that we feel we have to warn you against killing of the good ones...
Sunday, 10 January 2010 18:17
If Freya wasn't a psychic, I'd be on Mal's side here. There's a lot of unknowns.

Plus, the story IS called Masks... River found her hideaways and brought up the allegory, but it absolutely HAS to have some relevance with this part of the storyline too.
Sunday, 10 January 2010 19:54
Hmmmm. Bringing disjunct threads together to coincide with a climax. Social masks, personal masks, masks for hidden motivations and manipulations. Hmmm. Very interesting.
Sunday, 10 January 2010 21:56
I think I missed a chapter some time over the holidays but you're writing is easy the follow on one level and quite complex on another (sure you aren't related to Joss in some way?)

As to Will, I'm not quite sure about him yet. He has a lot of baggage to deal with.

Monday, 11 January 2010 21:06
Interesting. I have the feeling that Flynn would like to know his mother but has been so turned against her by his grandparents that he is having trouble finding the truth of it and wary of trying. Have a feeling all kinds of things are coming slowly to the boil behind the gorram scenes. Ali D :~)
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