Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Auld Lang Syne

Wednesday, December 30, 2009

A short one-shot, set during the Unification War. Mal is on watch and his thoughts turn to home. No OCs, so can be read by anyone. Enjoy!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3559    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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According to the sky, it was probably some time after midnight. The moon was on its downward path towards the horizon, and in a few hours the sun would struggle into view, giving an illusion of warmth were there was none. For the moment, though, he could imagine that only the stars above him, bright and brittle, were his companions on this little rock.

Of course, to do that he had to ignore the fact that an Alliance unit were entrenched a hundred yards away from him, and his own men – and women – were hunkered down in the trees, trying not to be seen or heard. Hopefully they were also getting some sleep, but he doubted it. Too ready for fight or flight, if he knew them.

A voice from the purplebelly camp shivered through the cold air as the watch changed, and a shuffling indicated someone heading back to their tent and not worrying about anyone listening.

A half-smile tilted his lips. Maybe they’d be lucky, and when the morning came the enemy would move on towards the town, and they’d be able to get back to their battalion without firing a single shot.

Something caught at his nostrils, a perfume, somehow familiar ... wood smoke. The prevailing breeze, what little there was of it, had dragged the scent from one of the camp fires turning back the night, ticking his senses in more ways than one. Tickling his memories, too.

His mother was always up early, even on a day like today. Making up the fires, turning the chilled house into a place of warmth and comfort, of a ready welcome.

A day like today. He knew, even without looking at the watch in his pocket – even if he could have seen the dial – that on Shadow it was first thing, the tip of the sun peaking over the edge of the world. He had always known, no matter what planet he’d been on, no matter what the local time or date. Some of his comrades had laughed at him at first, saying he was crazy, that nobody could possibly keep track of time that way. Then they’d checked and stopped talking.

He always figured he must have carried a li

Comments
Wednesday, 30 December 2009 15:32
This is so wonderful.. but knowing what we know so heartbreakingly sad. Your writing is so vivid. I read and I am there... witnessing the events. Thank you again for sharing your talent with us.

Happy New Year, Jane!
Wednesday, 30 December 2009 18:02
Wonderfully amazing as always! This just made me want to cry....
2X2
Wednesday, 30 December 2009 20:03
Very nice! I especially like the idea of Mal knowing, no matter where he is, what time it was on Shadow.
Thursday, 31 December 2009 03:58
Your words made me feel the winter chill even though I'm snuggy warm at home and very grateful for it. Beautiful writing and brutal honest feelings from Mal - let's you know why he feels the way he does in Firefly. Thanks for sharing!
Friday, 01 January 2010 01:50
I can so imagine a scene like this between one year's ending and another's beginning, even with war waging fitfully around them. It is always a comfort when Mal has Zoe near, like having a compass that is true and always points North. As if should be. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Friday, 01 January 2010 17:42
This is a nice moment. Bittersweet. Imagine if it's already happened and he just hasn't heard yet. Ouch.

I wonder if those Alliance soldiers are drunk? Wouldn't be unprecedented in the history of the world for a unit to be drunk and let an opposing force to slip past them.

Looks like we got hit by a wayward bit of code here. I'll tell Haken, just in case it's some kind of back door gateway thing.



Saturday, 09 January 2010 22:29
I really enjoyed noticing the way you have with describing setting - very nicely done indeed. And Zoe's reply: 'Possibly'. Perfect.

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