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Masks - Part XI

Monday, December 7, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. The escaped prisoners are on board Serenity, and Mal has to find a way of dealing with them without anyone getting hurt ... NEW CHAPTER

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By the time Mal got to the cargo bay, dressed only in a hastily donned pair of black sleep pants and carrying his gun, Jayne had Betsey trained on the man using River as a shield. He could see panels were open on three of the four containers, and rubble was strewn across the floor, but Mal was more concerned that there were at least four other men in positions ready to fire amongst the cages.

Gos se ,” he breathed, a little piece of him thankful that Jayne hadn’t picked up Vera instead. A hull breach would be all they needed.

“You’ll be wanting to drop that gun, Captain,” the man standing behind River said, his own weapon not half an inch from her cheek. “Unless you’d like this little lady here to meet her maker.”

Cursing the fact that Zoe and Frey were otherwise engaged, Mal spoke quietly to Jayne. “Think we can take ‘em?”

“Yeah. But not ‘fore they hurt moonbrain.”

“It’s all right, Jayne,” the young woman in question said. “They won’t hurt me.”

There was a snigger from someone on hearing the big man’s name, but the leader pushed his gun harder into River’s face. “Wouldn’t be too sure about that.”

A sound below indicated Simon was standing in the common area doorway. “River …”

“Don’t,” Mal said warningly, only taking a glance to see the doctor was armed.

“It’s my sister,” Simon pointed out, his natural calmness taking over.

“I know that.” Mal felt rather than heard Hank arrive behind him, out of breath from anxiety rather than running. “Just don’t do anything stupid. Least, not ‘til I say.”

“I’ll try not to.”

“Come on, Coombs,” one of the other men called. “Let’s get this done.”

“You try anything and you’ll be the first with a bullet in your head,” Jayne warned.

Albatross? Mal thought. You okay?

Shiny. And I'm sorry.

What for?

Letting them out.

I’m figuring they were planning on taking over the ship anyway.

Yes, but I'm still sorry.

Not your fault.

River gave a half smile. Or yours.

His lips twitched.

Comments
Tuesday, 08 December 2009 00:16
Yes! Bad guys dead. Simon's only shot a little and they got coin outta the deal.

Now Mal only has to deal with the mental tongue lashing he's gonna get from Frey...
Tuesday, 08 December 2009 01:41
Knew it was going to be bad, but I'm sure this isn't all the crew will have to cope with until Freya., Kaylee and Zoe get back.
Tuesday, 08 December 2009 02:39
Nice answer to a hostile takover. Glad it had a happy ending. It was a nice contrast between a real baddie and Mal - what Mal would or wouldn't do to keep his family safe. Very interesting. Now he has even more to worry about than ever. And you are slowly building to the climax - looking forward to more!
Tuesday, 08 December 2009 02:58
Always a good thing, though the last bit was extra funny and special. River still rocks and Simon is okay...looks like you've got things settled after all....
Tuesday, 08 December 2009 03:28
I like when Jayne knocks Mal's gun from up above right to him. Very nice, cinematic.

Tuesday, 08 December 2009 16:22
I am grinning from ear to ear because for once our Big Damn Heroes came out on top without too much in the way of injury to themselves and wonder of wonders, Mal isn't full of holes. Good to know that Simon isn't badly hurt though I am sure it hurts. Can't help worrying though about the people who set this all up. The unnamed 'third party'. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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