Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Masks - Part VI

Thursday, October 29, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. It's not just Freya going on the cruise with the Reilly twins ... and there might be trouble ahead - but when isn't there? NEW CHAPTER and my sincere apologies for the unforgivably long delay in posting.

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Freya’s announcement silenced the room more effectively than if she’d said she was planning on turning Reaver.

Of all of them, only River wasn’t staring, more concerned with Caleb not choking on his food than her surrogate mother’s announcement she was intending to accompany the Reilly girls on their cruise.

Besides, she knew anyway, having picked it up while Freya and Mal were still arguing.

“You’re going with them?” Simon asked finally, getting his tongue under control.

“Mal’s right,” Freya said, glancing at her husband. “I don’t feel happy about the girls being let loose on an unsuspecting ‘verse either, considering the damage I think they could do.” She smiled at Val and Phoebe, whose budding objections were silenced as they realised she was joking. “And the truth is they need some kind of bodyguard, if nothing else to fight off all the young men who are bound to fall in love with them. And it really wouldn’t be fair to make them wait any longer. So I’ll be it, at least until the liner gets to Persephone.”

“How long’ll that be?” Kaylee wanted to know, visions of scented oils, huge bath towels and pampered from head to toe until she was sick blooming in her mind.

“Ten days or so. Two weeks, tops, if we pick up the liner at Beaumonde.” Freya laughed. “And I wasn’t thinking of going alone. I think Zoe should come as well.”

The dark woman’s eyes widened. “Me?”

“Zoe?” Hank echoed.

“I think it would do her good, make sure she got some rest and relaxation.” Freya looked at Simon. “The strapping’s coming off soon, isn’t it?”

“In a few days,” the doctor agreed. “Then it will just be a case of gentle exercise.”

“Something she might not get on board,” Mal put in, for some reason glancing at his pilot as he did so, who managed to look affronted.

“I'm fine, sir,” Zoe said. “And don’t I have a say?”

“There’s low grav pools, gymnasia, massage therapists …” Freya laid out the extras on the table, making Kaylee drool even more. “I don’t think she could be in better han

Comments
Friday, 30 October 2009 01:12
So when are you going to let us in on who is the target of the kidnappers? Loved to see more of this story and now you made the stakes very high since most of the womenfolk will be aboard the liner. Glad you left the resident psychic aboard to tell the men there's a problem.
Friday, 30 October 2009 04:23
The roller coaster is about to leave the station. I can't wait to see what you have in store for those going on the liner and those left behind.

I know it'll be twisty and have lots of turns and it looks like it will be one heck of a ride.
Friday, 30 October 2009 04:31
I loved Inara and Freya in this one. Oh, and the couch line was just perfect. Nicely done, but me thinks cruise is not going to be all relaxation.
Friday, 30 October 2009 10:50
Loved the FREYA goodness best, and when the women set their minds to something you just know the men on Serenity have no choice but to go along with it. I wasn't surprised at the kidnappers discussion at the end, after all, we can't have a nice shiny cruise going smooth can we? But who are they talking about? None of our ladies have joined the liner yet or even bought the tickets which makes me think there must be somebody already booked to travel and three guesses who will be caught up in the whole gorram thing? Yep, think it's time for the ladies to be Heroes in this one! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Friday, 30 October 2009 23:58
Bad Jane.... Leaving big cliffhangers....


Just like I do (Evil Grin)

Bravo as usual!

Saturday, 31 October 2009 00:09
more please with a cherry on top :)

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