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HOPE SERIES: 11. "Family Values"

Tuesday, September 22, 2009

"As Serenity nears Carousel, Captain and crew settle down for their meal but not everyone seems at ease."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4199    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "FAMILY VALUES"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Simon/Kaylee.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: Sequel to "NO GOOD DEED".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: None. All Firefly stories archived at Fireflyfans.net

SUMMARY: "As Serenity nears Carousel, Captain and crew

settle down for their meal but not everyone seems at ease."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"FAMILY VALUES"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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The dust bowl looked nothing and everything like it had when she had first seen it. Only now the scouring sands lifted and patinated their gritty faces against walls made near invisible by being painted in the same muted shades of white and dusty yellow. The structures were sound, solid. Made of stone cut out of the little low mountain range to the North side of White Sands and cemented together into houses, out buildings and storage sheds. The last coat of paint was thick with the sand, slapped on the walls and covering even the roof tops and left to set and dry in the unremitting heat. Overall effect was the best gorram camoflage she had ever seen. The old woman turned her head and spit a plug of tobacco on to the ground then automatically covered it with the edge of her boot, not even needing to see where it had fallen to know it broke the uniform nothing she had worked so hard to achieve.

Her foreman didn't interrupt, just came and stood a respectful distance from her. He knew she was aware of him and waiting had never been an issue he could not surmount. The pay wasn't good, the living conditions neither, but she took in all his kinfolk as well. Gave them roofs over their heads and coin for food and necessities that at least kept body and soul together. Didn't ha

Comments
Tuesday, 22 September 2009 21:55
This was great. I love that Hope goes to each of the crew lookin' for what they are best at so she can keep her Mama safe. She's such a chip off the block of Zoe. Great job at creating her!!
Wednesday, 23 September 2009 06:03
Somehow I think Hope's knife throwing will come in handy way to soon.
Wednesday, 23 September 2009 17:20
Always go to the best, that way they can teach you without bad habits. I too am wondering about why Mal is making sure all those with children are left behind, and I love that Inara has picked up on it. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Thursday, 24 September 2009 00:54
How well written that moment of mourning for Hope's lost innocence and pride in her growing independence was. The perfect mix of all the tangled emotions of a mother for her child. Well done indeed!

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