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A Perfect Day - Part II

Saturday, August 8, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. Simon puts his foot in it - again - but manages to apologise. NEW CHAPTER

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Midnight

The church clock in the middle of town had just finished tolling twelve, the sound bouncing back off the factories and rolling through the streets. A dog barked, chained to a kennel, just testing to see if it was worth a volley, then turned around twice and laid down, snuffling around his rear end with clipper teeth.

Everywhere was dark, quiet, except for one house, where lights burned back the night.

“Do you think it’s enough?” Ellie Frye asked, standing back and looking at the bed they’d made up in the downstairs parlour, softly padded with a number of mattresses, as well as comforters and pillows.

“It’s fine,” her husband, Eddie, said. “Besides, I’m sure Kaylee’s going to want to give birth back on Serenity.”

“No, she won’t.” His wife was adamant. “She said. That’s why she’s coming.” Her eyes narrowed. “You think maybe it needs another blanket? I mean, it’s pretty cold outside, and if she’s coming from a warm ship she might be –”

Eddie pulled her into his side, holding her tightly. “Ellie. Stop.”

She looked up into his face. “She’s my baby, Eddie. My little girl. And she’s coming home to have her son. Our grandson.”

“You’ve already got grandkids,” he reminded her.

“Oh, I know,” she said, swatting gently at him. “And I’d never let anything happen to Bethie, or Hope. But this is ... you know what I mean.”

He moved her around so he could embrace her properly. “You’re getting broody again.”

“No, I ain’t!” She tried to wriggle free, but only half-heartedly, after only a moment letting him comfort her as she wanted to be comforted. “We’re too old for more children, Eddie. But grandkids ... that’s the best of both worlds.”

He smiled and kissed her nose. “Reckon maybe it is. Get to hand ‘em back when they need changing.”

“Changing ...” Ellie’s face changed. “I’d better make sure there’s enough in the way of diapers.” She slipped out of his arms.

“I’m sure she’ll be bringing plenty.”

“That’s not the point.” She paused in the

Comments
Saturday, 08 August 2009 16:21
So cute. Mal certainly has gotten a lot better at childbirth since Heart of Gold! Loved the fluff and Simon's ability to just be a human being for once. Loved River's part in this, too.
Saturday, 08 August 2009 23:34
Crackin Me UP!!!! Mal, Simon, River, Jayne, and of course Kaylee.. wonderfilled read...

Yes Please!!!! May we have another??
Sunday, 09 August 2009 00:55
See Simon almost botch the politics of home birth!

Very nice.

~freeverse
Sunday, 09 August 2009 01:19
Simon always does it doesn't he? I can't wait to see his reaction to Ellie's "tea".
Sunday, 09 August 2009 10:06
I laughed at Simon almost getting himself into such hot water with Kaylee that he would never have sex again. Good thing he apologised right quick and save himself and his marriage. LOL. And I just loved this whole chapter, the crew Kaylee's surrogate family, the Captain wanting to be on hand for his *mei mei* and knowing River had snuck away to go to the house. Lovely. And Ellie Fry bustling about to have everything just perfect and ready for Kaylee. Yep, this was just over filling with shiny! Ali D :~)
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