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HOPE SERIES: 1. "Bundle of Joy"

Monday, August 3, 2009

"Months after Miranda, the terrible sadness that grips Serenity's crew is given an unexpected lift."

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TITLE: "BUNDLE OF JOY"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: First in the HOPE SERIES.

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: None. All Firefly stories archived at Fireflyfans.net

SUMMARY: "Months after Miranda, the terrible sadness that

grips Serenity's crew is given an unexpected lift."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"BUNDLE OF JOY"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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He would never say it but it was the damnedest thing. Even as 7lb 4oz of screaming, squirming, orange faced trouble he could see the gorram likeness. Made him stare unblinking, momentarily unable to take his eyes off Zoe's child. The crew fussing around, taking it in turns to soothe the new arrival, Kaylee mother henning for all she was worth, the warmed blanket carefully wrapped around the newly washed babe. Worn out but so proud it fogged up his eyes to look at her. Mal wanted to give Zoe a medal but it wasn't number one on his wish list. No. Swallowing hard and slow around the lump rising in his throat and threatening to choke him, the only thing he wanted. Really. Was for Wash to have lived. The thought made his heart stumble and ache, the baby's cries muted as if his ears were under water though he could plainly see that little mouth stretched open in a long loud wail.

Simon kept telling Zoe it was normal, natural even, for a baby to cry. The trauma of coming out of the birth canal, away from the mother's warmth, the soft soothing musical darkness of the womb. Into a world of harsh light, colder temperatures and images moving in and out of view as those baby eyes tried to focus, not yet recognising them as faces. People. Mal stayed where he was, a couple

Comments
Monday, 03 August 2009 01:36
"She likes ya, Cap'n."

Should have felt awkward but he didn't. Huh. Must'a been the shock. "She doesn't know me."

Jayne huffed. "That's why she likes ya."

I laughed really hard at that line.

Lovely story, it really captures such an event through Mal's eyes. I love how he doesn't want to soften up and hold the baby, but he just melts and knows they're all going to be wrapped around Hope's finger.
Monday, 03 August 2009 02:07
Love this, nothing brings hope more than a new baby!
Monday, 03 August 2009 02:28
Oh how sweet! I love this.
Monday, 03 August 2009 03:10
Oh yes, Zoe's child would have an instant affinity for Mal, I do believe. Wonderfully done! :)
Monday, 03 August 2009 04:34
Great job on this - everyone so in character - even little Hope. Of course she was going to favor Mal - like mother like daughter. Love the relationships you described - and so like River to spring the name before Zoe.
Monday, 03 August 2009 04:35
I don't believe in the supernatural, but the concept of an "old soul" is an interesting one. Who do you think she is?
Monday, 03 August 2009 04:54
A generation comes and a generation goes.
But Serenity endures.
Monday, 03 August 2009 12:18
Thank you for all the shiny comments! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Monday, 03 August 2009 12:38
Lovely little tale. Everything I would have commented on has been said, so I'll just say that it warmed me through, and I'd like to see a few later fics in Hope's life ...
Monday, 03 August 2009 20:34
With all the positive feedback Jane, you could get what you want! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Friday, 10 September 2010 02:57
I cried. I had no choice. I just had a second little girl eight months ago, so it was REALLY easy to picture this. Lovely job, as always.
Saturday, 11 September 2010 11:06
Congratulations on the birth of your second bundle of joy, avalonsmommy. So happy the story resonated with you. Shiny! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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