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Jericho Wells - Part XXI

Sunday, July 26, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. Finally we hear what Zoe has to say, and River finishes her part. NEW CHAPTER (and I hope it was worth the wait!)

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As Cromwell announced her, Zoe stood up and walked to the front of the stage, her head held high, making sure the light caught the swelling still closing her eye, the cut, the bruises.

She could hear a vague uneasiness in the audience about her clothing, but more than one woman was looking her up and down in a speculative way, perhaps thinking that pants might be more comfortable, and a lot more practical.

She waited, letting everyone get a good look, taking so long she could see Cromwell starting to get nervous.

Finally she spoke, her voice filling the large hall without even needing to be raised.

“Seen enough?” she asked. “And before you judge, it wasn’t my husband. If it was he wouldn’t be my husband any more. But the men who did it … they’re not important. They’re less than nothing. It doesn’t matter who did this, what their motives were, whether they were paid or not. It doesn’t even matter that it was me who got stopped last night, threatened, beaten on. No-one should be treated like this. Male, female, child, adult … no-one has the right to deal this way with another human being just because they don’t agree with them, or because they’re stronger, or cleverer, or because it’s the way things have always been done, here on Jericho.”

Zoe took a breath, letting her words sink in. “That’s pretty much why I stood for women’s rights campaigner. In fact, it shouldn’t be called that at all. It should be campaigner for human rights. Because you need that. Someone to stand up and be counted, to say what some of you are probably thinking, but are too afraid to voice. To avow and declare that everyone has the right to live their life under nobody’s heel, to be able to complain when something is wrong without fear, without having to look over their shoulder so often that it becomes a habit, until it’s so ingrained that the whole gorram planet acts the same.”

She could see Hank at the back of the hall, nodding encouragingly, the others next to him, Kaylee beaming so hard that she

Comments
Sunday, 26 July 2009 16:10
Glad Zoe gave the voters a piece of her mind and that it was well received. And the River/Jayne fluff, in their own unique way.
Sunday, 26 July 2009 20:03
While I appreciate the bits of fluff you have provided for our delection, to me the following is the most important line in your tale:

“That’s pretty much why I stood for women’s rights campaigner. In fact, it shouldn’t be called that at all. It should be campaigner for human rights"

Well said, and not said enough.
Too much confusion nowdays around rights - in group rights - by sex, preference, race, ... the list grows, and confuses. There are human rights, goodd for all humans - or there aren't any. If we all can't claim it, no one can. For me, this story leads up to and culminates in this moment. I'm sure you planned it that way.

I don't know where people find the time, and the talent, to write this well for free. I hope you and other gifted amatuers will keep it coming. I hope we will hear from you again soon.
Sunday, 26 July 2009 20:43
Wonderful job! Loved the words you used for Zoe - they were perfect and very well crafted. Kind of like the crew was meant to shake up complacent old Jericho anyways. Looking forward to more. Not that I don't love your cliffhangers - because you do them soooo well - but I'm glad this one is ending on a happy note.
Sunday, 26 July 2009 22:29
Brava, Zoe! And brava to you as well, Jane! Very well done! :)
Monday, 27 July 2009 08:49
It was good to finally hear Zoe's speech and worth the wait. I did worry though with River wanting to make love to Jayne out in the open in the park after setting everything up. Jericho being Jericho they would probably both be thrown in goal for a very long time under some law or other. Let's hope they don't get caught. And Kaylee, she always could wrap her Captain round her little finger. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Monday, 27 July 2009 18:19
Wonderful speech by Zoe. Well done. River and Jayne...well, hell, it's so like them. Who would expect anything different?! LOL!!

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