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Jericho Wells - Part XVIII

Saturday, July 11, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. The attack and aftermath on Zoe and Mercy, and maybe an idea of who was behind it. NEW CHAPTER

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“Boys, I don’t know who you think we are, but you’re wrong,” Zoe said, her eyes flicking between the five men threatening her and Mercy, her experience settling on the one in front of her as the leader, but the one at her back as most likely to turn and run if the occasion demanded. She settled herself more squarely on her feet.

“Oh, we’ve got the right ones. Saw you down in the square. Stirring up trouble.”

“We were having a perfectly legitimate debate,” Mercy put in, her voice cracking with apprehension.

“Nope. Stirring things up.” He took a step forward. “Making people question the natural order of things. Making them think maybe there’s another way. That we’re backwards here on Jericho.”

“Well, this ain’t hardly the civilised way of doing things,” Zoe said. “Waylaying two innocent women on their way home? What will the law say?”

“The law?” The man was suddenly in her face. “The law isn’t going to find out.”

The look in his eyes gave her such a premonition that Zoe wondered if she was the one catching the psychic gene now. “Let Mercy go.”

“No!” the young woman in question protested, even though her heart was beating a thousand times a minute.

“Why would we do that?” the man wanted to know.

Zoe’s voice dropped a level as she made the mental leap. “Because we both know I'm the one you’re being paid to rough up.”

He grinned. “P’raps you’re right.”

“Then let her leave.”

“I’m not going anywhere without you!” Mercy shouted.

“You will,” Zoe said.

“Maybe you’ve got us pegged, but the truth is, no-one’s going anywhere,” the man said, his face pulled into a sneer. “Neither of you. You’re both as bad as each other, teasing us, making us think you’re so easy, then not giving it.”

Zoe stared at him. “What?”

He shrugged. “All women are whores.” He flexed his hand inside the knuckleduster.

“We’re not afraid of you,” Mercy squeaked.

He turned on her. “You should be.”

Now, while his attention was diverted, while he was still intent on scaring,

Comments
Saturday, 11 July 2009 13:46
You sure are softening Jayne. Interesting intrigue with the candidates and the various ways people interpret what equality means to them. Whether equality means repressing everyone who doesn't think like you or just using it to more easily control others - we sure are a crazy bunch of folk. Love this storyline and am looking forward to where you are going with this.
Saturday, 11 July 2009 14:46
Zoe with a black eye, at the last meeting. I'm sure there will be words a plenty.
Saturday, 11 July 2009 14:59
Wow! I hate to be on Zoe's bad side right now. Lookin' forward to the final meeting? Me thinks Jericho won't know what hit 'em...walls are gonna crumble...sort of speak...
Saturday, 11 July 2009 20:11
What Angell said...


Top class work as usual.
Saturday, 11 July 2009 21:53
I love how Mercy won't back down even if she is a physical fighter she has some steel in her spine which living on Jericho is kind of necessary. I am disturbed though that when Jayne leaves to go and track the *hundan* down and have a word with them Mal leaves Frey with Mercy and goes back to Serenity with Zoe and Hank. I would have expected him to stay with his wife, an extra pair and eyes and gun, until Jayne got back. Don't like the thought that while he is back on Serenity with the others more bad guys could come calling on Mercy and then Frey would be in trouble. I can't wait to see how the town reacts at the next meeting when they see Zoe with a black eye and bruises and she and Mercy tell their tale. Should be mighty interesting. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Saturday, 11 July 2009 21:54
Ooops, meant to say 'even if she isn't a physical fighter', the isn't got lost among the rest of the gorram keys. Sorry. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 12 July 2009 00:17
Go Zoe! She needs to show Jericho the truth of their ways .. my favourite line by far was one of Mal's - “Wait a minute. What are you talking about? And how come you sound like you know?” it made me LOL for about 10 mins straight!!
Anna.x.(:
Monday, 13 July 2009 14:47
Oh, I don't know, Anna. I kind of favor "put the fear of Cobb into them," m'self! Beautifully done, Jane!
~freeverse
Tuesday, 14 July 2009 16:28
"Put the fear of Cobb into them?”

Ah. A nice touch.
Fear is useful.

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