Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Transition, Part 1

Sunday, July 5, 2009

Mal and Inara's children are gathering for Inara's birthday celebration. Reunion fic.

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PART 1

Little Zoë loved autumn more than any other time of year on Deadwood. The grass was still green from summer rains, but the humidity was gone and the air was perfectly cool. The soft grass tickled between her toes as she padded through it, tossing a Frisbee back and forth with Michael. She’d left her new shoes on the porch because the heels kept sinking into the soil. The stitches on her spine itched against her shirt and her abs were straining in protest about being upright, but she was so tired of sitting, and she wanted to be active while the pain pills were still working at their max. She’d never had the cancer hit her nervous system so hard and she found rehab incredibly frustrating and boring. Her control over the Frisbee left much to be desired.

“How many are coming?” she asked Michael. He’d arrived early that morning for their parents’ big party and nearly scared her to death by climbing through her window and crawling into bed next to her. One day, she’d tell him to stop doing that, but it was so precious that he wanted to spend that part of his day with her. That time was his. She’d hear more about his life in the twenty minutes before dawn than she would the entire twenty hours after.

“Just three,” he answered, tossing the Frisbee back to her. She was making him run, but he was considerately giving her easy tosses. “Berke, Jarvis, and Courtney.”

“You’re bringing the guys to hide the fact that you’re bringing the girl,” Zoë teased and Michael made a face. “I always thought you’d get back with Chelsea. You two had such chemistry.”

“In the daytime,” Michael allowed. “At night, she was so loud, I could never sleep.”

“Are you talking about snoring or the psychic equivalent?”

Michael held the Frisbee reflectively, forgetting to toss as his thoughts mulled over his ex. Michael claimed he’d done the leaving, but he clearly still had strong feelings for her.

“Was she your first?

Comments
Monday, 06 July 2009 01:19
Wow, you're fast.

Fun birthdays and good news, after the last saga's troubles. :)
Monday, 06 July 2009 04:14
Hah! I'm not writing this live-time. I have all 12 parts written and ready. I just don't like to flood the BSR.
SMALLFRYE
Monday, 06 July 2009 06:14
I love when you start a new story, you're great at writing the BDHs. Oh, you can't tease and say you've got all the parts. Maybe we could get a full pdf if you don't want to flood? I'm too curious as to what will happen next...
Monday, 06 July 2009 06:24
SmallFrye, I still may add scenes or modify bits based on your comments ...
Monday, 06 July 2009 16:29
Lovely family piece. But with just a hint or two of possible angst flavouring. Looking forward to more.
Monday, 06 July 2009 17:39
So much going on here and you're hiding as much as you're revealing - I like it!
Monday, 06 July 2009 19:52
I'm betting Michael eavesdropped on Cole and knows his brother is going to be a daddy. Love how tight knit Mal's family is and had to chuckle at him not having got up the nerve to tell Inara what was happening. Um, I'm with Michael, he really shouldn't spring this on her when everyone is there. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Friday, 25 November 2011 17:03
great cole is gonna b a dadddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddy :):):):)(:):):):):):)::):):):::::)))))))))))))))) yaaaaaay loved it going to part two now :)

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