Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The DUPLICITY Series: 66. "All Fall Down"

Friday, June 19, 2009

"Gabriel unveils his plan to General Franks. River and Natalie discover that liberating Serenity is the easy part as Simon fights to save the Captain's life. Meanwhile Minister Rosenbaum's ambition runs into an unexpected hitch."

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TITLE: "ALL FALL DOWN"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Zoe/Wash. Kaylee/Simon. Mal/Inara.

RATING: G.

STATUS: Sequel to "EVERYONE'S A HERO".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: None. All Firefly stories archived at Fireflyfans.net

SUMMARY: "Gabriel unveils his plan to General Franks. River

and Natalie discover that liberating Serenity is the easy part as

Simon fights to save the Captain's life. Meanwhile Minister

Rosenbaum's ambition runs into an unexpected hitch."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"ALL FALL DOWN"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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Even though she was with Wash, Kaylee couldn't stop trembling. She was frightened. Anxiously waiting to hear from the Captain, for him to tell them the coast was clear, but there was no sign just the occasional echo of movement as if the ship was being searched. Wash clutched her arm. Kaylee stared into his faceplate. "*Shenme*?"

"*Fang xin*, Kaylee. Mal has a plan, *jide*?"

Kaylee wasn't comforted. Not that she didn't have full faith in her Captain it was just that things rarely worked out the way they ought to. Not his fault that the 'verse was tweaked that way but it did make their lives more interesting than she liked. "Why ain't we heard nothin', Wash? Should'a heard gunfire or an explosion or somesuch..."

The pilot put a hand up, stopping her mid-sentence. His eyes widened and Kaylee held her breath the better to hear any extraneous sounds beyond her EVA suit. It sounded like a dull clanging, a distant hatch perhaps? A slow smile spread across her face then the emergency lights flickered and went out. Panic crowded in her belly, rose up and trapped air in her lungs, bile gathering in the back of he

Comments
Friday, 19 June 2009 02:43
Okay....that last part sent chills up my bones and you know that that's an accomplishment.

Not sure I'm liking the sound of Gabriel's plans. He's either really got everyone snowed or he plans on something horrible.

And girlfriend, what did poor Mal ever do to you?! LOL! You sure like to hurt him and put him in rather bad positions. Just no killin' him, dong ma?!
Friday, 19 June 2009 05:10
Excellent chapter! I am still so enthralled with this story! Anxiously awaiting further developments! :)
Friday, 19 June 2009 10:41
As bad as things look for Mal at the moment Angellemarcs he has already hit rock bottom which means the only way left is up - kind of. Some good however has come out of his dire predicament. Glad you are enthralled with this story slumming as we come up to the last few chapters. Thanks for the feedback, it makes my little heart sing! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Friday, 19 June 2009 12:25
So, what's that? Half the Alliance high-ups and a fair few Blue Sun execs wiped out at a single sitting? Gabriel sure knows how to do things in a spectacular fashion. And the way River feels about Mal, as her father that should have been, is exactly how I write her too. And Simon's mending of Mal ... hopefully the Cap will come out stronger and better than ever.

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