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Jericho Wells - Part VII

Thursday, May 21, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. Zoe puts her name down for office, and Mal takes Freya for a walk. NEW CHAPTER

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“This is not a good idea,” Freya said, walking along with her hands in her pockets.

“We’re just honest citizens,” Mal pointed out. “All we’re doing is accompanying a prospective candidate to the Election office.”

Zoe, half a pace ahead of them, glanced over her shoulder. “You don’t have to come, sir.”

“And have you sneaking off? I don’t think so.”

“I don’t sneak.”

“Good.”

“And I don’t think that’s what Freya was talking about, sir.”

“I wasn’t,” the woman in question agreed. “I meant your plan.”

Mal smiled. “Frey, honey, we’re just taking a walk. Besides, this place needs its pomposity pricked.”

The night before, he’d explained what he and Zoe had been planning on their walk back from Lacey’s and their meeting with Leo Gunn, and for a moment, just as he was at his most vulnerable by getting naked, he thought she was going to get angry with him. Instead she just sighed.

“Mal, why can’t we just let Kaylee do her thing, let Zoe do her thing, and leave?”

“Because this is my thing.” He’d slipped under the covers and pulled her to him, feeling her body relax against him, her chin resting on his chest.

“Your thing is getting shot,” she pointed out.

“Not always.”

“Most of the time.”

“No, now, that’s not –”

“Do you want me to get River to work out the math?”

He looked down at her, her face lifted towards his, her eyes dark in the dim glow of the night light. “Is this ‘cause I had me a drink?”

“No.”

“Frey ...”

She dipped her head, laying it back in the crook of his shoulder. “Maybe.”

“I only had a couple.”

“I know.”

“Then what’s the ... oh.” He realised, albeit belatedly, as her fingers traced the scar on his chest. He put his hand on hers, holding it steady. “Frey, I wouldn’t do anything stupid. Well, not any more stupid than normal,” he revised quickly. “I stopped taking those pills Simon gave me half a week back, and he said I could have a drink again. So I had a couple. That’s all. It ain’t gonna kill me.”

She didn't speak for a

Comments
Thursday, 21 May 2009 18:21
Lol! Oops for Zoe .. I wonder who'll write the speech? My vote goes for River (Y)
Anna.x.(:
Friday, 22 May 2009 02:15
What a mess they're in, but I'm sure you have a plan on how to get them in deeper before you get them out of it. Looking forward to more.
Friday, 22 May 2009 02:42
Love the 'Walk' between Frey and Mal. How Mal got a little insulted that she thought of him and Leo being somewhat the same. Sounded like how he would of responded.
Friday, 22 May 2009 04:57
Can't wait to see how the crew will get out of this mess.
Friday, 22 May 2009 10:46
You write Zoe brilliantly (not that you don't do the same for everyone else but sometimes writers have trouble getting her right and you are spot-on). I don't like that official and hope he won't be making trouble. As for the conversation between Mal and Frey that warmed my heart just as it always does when you include some Maya goodness. I wish they could just ride out the rutting election and leave, getting mixed up in it just feels like the grand-daddy of Bad Ideas. The fallout though should be fun. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 22 May 2009 10:48
Forgot to said, I about cracked up at Zoe wondering if it was too late to persuade Mal to have the operation. LOL. I have a feeling Frey would have something to say about that. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 23 May 2009 21:03
Zoe felt like she wanted to go and shower, or perhaps punch someone, preferably him, but maybe this was the best time to start as she meant to go on. “Women’s rights.”---Something about this line just tickled me. Maybe it was the been-there, done-that factor...ah, life as a woman! lol
Sunday, 24 May 2009 20:29
Oh dear, Jane! Thing is, she'll probably give quite the speech--though I'm not sure that will be well received in Pleasantville, there. And can the official, who sounds like a poor respecter of women's rights, to put it mildly, get his comeuppance along the way? After all, if it's elections, 'tis the season....

Glad you finally got to see some Castle eps.

~freeverse

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