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Destiny: Ch. 5 - Remembering the Past

Wednesday, September 22, 2004

Trouble arises for the crew of Destiny. Plans continue to unfold, though the details are still fuzzy, the crews of Serenity and Destiny meet for the first time, and Zoe remembers someone from her past...

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“I’m really likin’ the Captain’s idea that we stay here a few extra days, especially with a spa like this available to our private use.”

Tark sat in the bubbling hot tub, holding Gretta tight against him. The doctor smiled up at the mercenary, emphasizing what she had just said. “I’m tellin’ you, Spooks, a girl could get used to a life like this.”

“Didn’t you have stuff like this back on Sihnon?” Tark asked.

She shrugged. “Probably did, but I was too stuck into school and doctoring duties and the like. Honestly, I didn’t really even know what is was like to just relax until you brought the Captain into my office with a hole in his chest.”

Tark frowned, remembering what had happened on Florida Moon and the agony of the long flight to Osiris because no Alliance ship would let them board to get Etris taken care of. So much for the Alliance taking care of their own. Etris had actually died right before they had gotten him into the hospital, but Gretta had fixed him up nice. But Florida Moon…he remember the firefight there, when Etris had led a rescue mission onto the slaver ship to free the rest of his crew. They had almost lost, too, but Davis…Davis, the hwoon dahn engineer that had betrayed them in the first place offered the slavers a trade: himself, for the life of his former Captain.

God himself only knew where Davis was now.

“Spook, you still with me?”

Pulled out of his thoughts, Tark smiled down at Gretta. That was all in the past now, and Gretta was his future. “I’m good.” He leaned down to kiss her, to blank everything else out of his mind, when his communicator went off. He cursed.

“This better be good,” he growled, grabbing the black box.

Togan’s voice came back sounding rather worried. “You’d better get back here quick,” he said. “We’ve got a problem brewing.”

Tark groaned. Not now! “How bad is it?”

The terse response from the engineer came back quickly. “Bad. Get back here now!”

* * *

“Every piece of this protein is marked,” the man yelled out, his gun trained o

Comments
Thursday, 23 September 2004 02:21
Whoa, that's good!
Thursday, 23 September 2004 07:30
Shiny!

I'm really enjoying how you're playing and portraying Zoe in this story--looking forward to more of it. I do hope you'll get into Mal's head when we get to the mother part, be nice to see that from his POV if you can work that out.

I absolutely adore the way those protein bars from ep.1 are haunting their way 'round the 'verse!

Dandy story. Very compelling. I'm liking this Alliance crew and how similar they are to Serenity's, and yet with the past allegiances creating subtly shaded differences.
Thursday, 23 September 2004 13:07
This is getting shinier by the minute. It is really great to see some insight into Zoe and I can't wait to see what the gorram happens next. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 14 November 2004 12:22
Whoah! I'm enjoying the incorporation of the Firefly crew in this story(and Zoe's backstory at the Battle of Serenity and how it connects to Destiny) a lot.
The references to Patience and the protein bars in the pilot episode is cleverly interwoven into the story. Great stuff SOS!
Friday, 26 November 2004 09:21
This idea of Zoe meeting up with an Alliance officer in the war closely mirrors some of my ideas that I've had for my own fic.

Definitely going to have to visit the storyboard for a rethought.

Oh well, I might have to concede that you've done it first and move on.

Next chapter...
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Sunday, 29 May 2005 22:00
esta pagiana esta bien pero se deve limitar alos posibles y enteros hechos tontos bye mi name is:nany

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