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The DUPLICITY Series: 57. "The Dominant Gene"

Wednesday, April 8, 2009

"Badger tries to wrap his head arounda complete change in circumstances. Inara worries about the fallout of Simon's discovery. River wants to reassure the Captain and Jordan keeps a promise."

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TITLE: "THE DOMINANT GENE"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Zoe/Wash. Kaylee/Simon. Mal/Inara.

RATING: G.

STATUS: Sequel to "DISINGENUOUS".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: None. All Firefly stories archived at Fireflyfans.net

SUMMARY: "Badger tries to wrap his head around a complete

change in circumstances. Inara worries about the fallout of

Simon's discovery. River wants to reassure the Captain and

Jordan keeps a promise."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"THE DOMINANT GENE"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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He was genuinely shocked. Shaken even but in that distant, distracted way that didn't connect immediately with the here and now or what he had done. Badger stared at the crumpled body, eyes open but no longer pleading. Noticing idly the white hairs showing through at the base of the scalp where her fall had dislodged the carefully coiffed and tinted hair. It was easier from this angle to see the ravages of time previously hidden by cunning necklines and high fashion. The hands, always a give away, had been treated with the kind of cosmetic surgery only available to the very rich. Now, all that artifice seemed the height of folly. As if anyone could cheat death.

Badger had no idea how long he sat there, the bottle of tiny white pills as heavy as lead in his hand but unable to let go. Only minutes ago his mother had been alive and pleading, first with her cracking voice then with her eyes. How quickly they had dulled! Almost he disbelieved the evidence of his eyes, half expecting her to be playing some mean and evil trick on him. But no. The awkward angle of her limbs, the unblinking staring eyes clouded with death. Even the air in the hotel room

Comments
Wednesday, 08 April 2009 23:36
As for Badger, I feel for him losing his mom....but not a whole lot...LOL!!

"He takes so much looking after." Best line in this!

As for Simon shocker....WOW!! So did not see that comin'!!! You are the master or should I say Mistress of surprises....

And the descruction at the end...I felt the explosion from here...Well written.
Wednesday, 08 April 2009 23:56
I admit I'm surprised at Badger letting his mother die. I felt she had more to give to this story, but a lot of people have died already, so one more is probably not the end of it. But the destruction described was very powerful, and Simon's own bombshell ... Can't wait to see where you take this next!
Thursday, 09 April 2009 00:32
Glad to see Jason retained enough humanity to come through when he needed it. Poor Simon. No wonder the siblings need each other so much.
Thursday, 09 April 2009 01:09
Thank you for the shiny feedback! An apology to you all, I didn't notice until reading your feedback Katesfriend that I was calling Jordan, Jason. Have rectified that so many sorries. I also liked the notion that Jordan still had some humanity which he put to good use at the end. As for Simon's shock revelation Angellemarcs I always thought it would be a good twist if River wasn't the only sibling the Alliance had tampered with. And Jane0904 Badger didn't intend for his mother to die, he was trying to gain an advantage but it backfired and she died without telling him anything. Glad you liked the explosions and many thanks to you all for the shiny feedback! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 18 April 2009 04:16
Wow, what an explosive chapter, both literally and figuratively! More, please! :)

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