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Ripples - Part V

Sunday, April 5, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. Zoe's conversation with Sam. NEW CHAPTER (and forgive the delay - for some reason this was a difficult chapter to write!)

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In the warm sunshine by the lake Zoe stared out across the water to where Hank had baited his hook and dropped it off the side of the boat, and was now waiting for something to bite. Pretty much like she was doing. She’d asked Sam what her husband had said about Sweetwater …

“Not a great deal,” the therapist admitted. “It wasn't the specifics he wanted to talk about.”

“No. He said that didn’t matter.”

“I have, of course, heard of it.”

She jerked her head around to look at him. “You have?”

“Of course.” He looked surprisingly relaxed. “It’s almost impossible to read anything about the war without encountering the Dust Devils. That the places they hit were mostly military, but there were other incidents. Soft targets.”

She was surprised. “Sweetwater was listed?”

“It was.”

She sighed heavily. “My ignominy write large for the ‘verse to see.”

“It didn’t mention names.”

“That’s only a small comfort. They didn’t know who we were, else I'm sure we’d be splashed over the pages.”

“Probably.” He ran a hand through his short hair, and an idle and treacherous thought crossed his mind as to how long it would take to grow back, but his main focus was on the woman next to him. “You were in the camps with Mal, yes?”

“Mmn.”

“So the Dust Devils were after?”

“No. Before.” She leaned down and picked up a stone, tossing it into the lake, watching ripples spread across the water. “Mal … after we got picked up by the medships, he got sick. Real sick. Only it wasn’t just his body that was rebelling. They put him in the infirmary, wouldn’t let me see him at first, then when I managed to get there he hardly seemed to know me. It made me … mad, I guess.”

“So you joined the Dust Devils for him?”

“That’s what Hank asked. And no. Not really. But … there was an escape planned, and I got caught up in it. I didn’t want to go, wanted to stay close to Mal, but they said I had to, since otherwise they were afraid I’d tip the Alliance off.” She shook her head. “As if I would.

Comments
Monday, 06 April 2009 00:16
Glad to see more of this story. I think you interwove the past and present history of Zoe perfectly - all the pieces fit. And glad to see that the couples are, well, coupling, and next we get to hear what is wrong with Mal/Freya.
Monday, 06 April 2009 00:52
I absolutely adored the way you had Zoe open up to Sam then explain to Hank in a way that he could both understand and accept. And River mentally sending the cat away but keeping Jayne out there looking made me smile. Quite the little match maker. Hope we get some Mal and Freya goodness soon. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 06 April 2009 03:49
Wonderful advice that Sam gave Zoe and I'm glad that she acted on it.

And River and Jayne, what a hoot!

Now it's just Mal and Freya and I'm sure that'll be interesting.
Monday, 06 April 2009 08:53
THANK YOU! I'm a nervous wreck at the moment, and a new chapter calmed me right down. You have impeccable timing. xD I also Loved the Sam/Zoe revelation section, its always good to hear a little background, and its even better because now Hank/Zoe are on the road to recovery ...
Anna.x.(:
Monday, 06 April 2009 14:14
Well, so many things have been said. I really enjoyed the way you worked Wash into this. I could so see Hank being jealous of her former lover and hubby because aren't we all at times with our significant others. Nicely done!!

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