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Ripples - Part III

Sunday, March 29, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. Dinner on Lazarus, and the idea of a cruise is discussed. Or rather, argued about. NEW CHAPTER

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That evening everyone congregated in the back drawing room to eat, Mal having made it clear that he wasn't intending to be kept out of things that much. Simon had been insistent that the captain wasn’t going to be walking anywhere as yet, so with Jayne’s help Mr Boden had whipped up a table from nowhere, added chairs, and everyone was crowded around, eating as much of the good food as they could get into their mouths.

Kaylee was talking about Serenity. “In some ways it ain't as bad as I first thought,” she was explaining. “Lot of systems died in that EMP pulse, but most of ‘em I got fixed already, and those that I've bypassed I should be able to replace.”

“Good work, mei-mei ,” Mal praised, and his mechanic blushed happily.

“But the problem’s gonna be what I can’t see,” she went on.

“Can’t see? You?” Inara smiled at the young woman.

“Kinda like Mal and that Quicksilver. It did something none of us could see, and it weren’t until … well, you know …” She suddenly realised it might not actually be tactful to mention recent events, but everyone was nodding, although Freya was gripping her fork harder than was strictly necessary.

“You mean there might be damage that won’t show up until it gets worse?” Hank suggested.

“’Xactly.” She grinned at him, glad to get away from a sore subject. “I mean, Bethie’s helping, a’course, since she hears Serenity like I do, but we can’t be sure we’ve got it all.”

“So how do we fix it?” Zoe asked.

“Can’t. Not ‘less you wanna put into one of the major shipyards, get a top line computer diagnostic run on all systems.”

“Expensive?”

“Very.”

“Then we can’t afford it,” Mal said, wiping a hunk of bread around his plate and popping it into his mouth, chewing contentedly.

“But Cap …”

“Just have to rely on you to fix as and when,” he mumbled somewhat indistinctly. Simon had been very firm in denying him the steak, at least for that day, but he’d had fresh vegetables, gravy … all in all, not too bad. He swallowed. “Might be able to swing

Comments
Sunday, 29 March 2009 17:45
I'm glad Mal gave in .. everyone would've been grumpy for quite a while if he hadn't ..
Anna.x.(:
Sunday, 29 March 2009 18:57
Interesting as to the family dynamics you're showing here. Mal is definitely the protector here, for good reason in this 'verse. And of course he's going to be overprotective after knowing they are going into the Core. Very interesting what you revealed about Sam and his daughter - I sense another storyline on its way. Love how you are weaving in the togetherness in this arc.
Sunday, 29 March 2009 20:09
Always so good. I love Mal here, especialy in his protector mode. I think he is worried also because of what he just went through. Almost dying is hard to handle for someone as strong as Mal. More soon please!
Sunday, 29 March 2009 22:08
Loved Mal too in his protector mode. And I'm certain things will go pear shaped somehow, they always do.
Sunday, 29 March 2009 23:10
I would have been worried if Mal hadn't raised some kind of objection. With it being the first time the girls are going off on a cruise and given the way things have a habit of going to hell in a handbasket despite good intentions, the compromise of having Dillion or someone he trusts well to watch over them is the best solution all round though it would have been nice if the others had discussed it with Mal rather than making it seem like an ultimatum with no one looking out for any potential problems or hazards. I just hope the decision doesn't bite them all in the ass in the end. And little Ethan, so sweet, bless him! Personally it would have been shiny if the whole crew had gone with the girls on a cruise, a sort of introduction for them into adult life without them having to fly solo without a safety net. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 30 March 2009 11:37
Great S/I & M/F interaction.. you can see the tension slowly releasing. Mal being Mal...



And then Mal says "he's SUCH a whiner"

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