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Kith and Kin - Part VIII

Tuesday, March 17, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. Okay, because I'm NOT evil and I didn't want you to have to hang on for too long, here it is. River and Jayne take matters into their own hands. NEW CHAPTER

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3729    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Boone aimed at Freya but looked at and spoke to Zoe. “Let’s see how you like watching her die in front of you.”

A shot rang through the superstructure.

-

A little while earlier …

Immediately the EMP pulse hit River knew what was going to happen, as clearly as if she was remembering the future. Even in the pitch black she could feel the shape of Serenity, and it was only the work of a moment to run through the infirmary doors into the common area then up into the cargo bay. Jayne’s aura gave him away, standing facing the doors.

Jayne.

“They’re coming,” he said, not turning.

“I know.”

He looked down at Vera in his hands, even though he couldn’t see her. “Can we fight ‘em off?”

“Not like that.”

“Then what?” He felt a hand on his arm, directing him to one side even as there was the sound of someone else coming into the bay.

Freya swore as her shin connected with something in the dark, but she located the cages quickly enough.

Jayne opened his mouth to speak, but River’s hand tightened.

We gonna be doing something the cap wouldn’t approve of? he thought carefully.

Definitely.

He grinned in the darkness. Good.

Freya hurried back to the infirmary, lanterns in her hands.

“Help me,” River whispered.

“Moonbrain, I can’t see a gorram thing. Just ‘cause you ate your carrots like a good girl when you was a kid –“ He stopped as there was the sound of something cracking, and a green glow developed in his wife’s hands. “That’s my crazy River,” he muttered, seeing the light reflect from her teeth as she smiled at his endearment.

“Here. We will need more.” She handed him another half a dozen, and they quickly activated them, spreading them around the cargo bay.

“Now what?” he asked.

She lifted the lid of the EVA suit locker. “Help me,” she repeated.

It didn’t take long to dress in the suits, but something was troubling Jayne. “You sure your bro don’t need you?”

“Kaylee is with him. Quickly, they’re – ” There was a

Comments
Tuesday, 17 March 2009 19:43
Thank you thank you for not keeping us in suspense much longer. So glad they're going to Lazarus. And so glad how you ended this - revenge should never be mistaken for justice. River was marvelous in this and I particularly loved how she "remembered the future". This was a real heartwrencher in every sense of the word for all parties. Wondering how Zoe and Hank are going to deal with this now. Ethan at the end was especially poignant. Beginning with family and ending with family. Well done!
Tuesday, 17 March 2009 20:15
Wow .. how cute is Ethan? Bless his little cotton socks!! Best line EVER in a Firefly fic can now be claimed by you: '"Not in here. In here, I am king.” Simon smiled.'
It made my Lol .. and my dad gave me the oddest look ever!! x3
Anna.x.(:

Tuesday, 17 March 2009 20:39
And see I knew you were not evil or I would have never shared that treasure I found for us. LOL!

Sooo good and I got to agree with Anna and the line. It made the whole story come alive. And I am so glad none of your 'main' characters died...You are a queen of not just the clisshangers, but also the storytelling.
Tuesday, 17 March 2009 20:39
Okay, that would be cliFFhangers....LOL!
Tuesday, 17 March 2009 22:47
Absolutely rip roaringly BRILLIANT! I loved how River had a plan and how she and Jayne crept onto the enemy ship in their EVA suits and turned the tables. And I loved that Simon saved Mal and Ethan and Jesse got to see their daddy for their own selves. Yup, just what Mal needed! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 18 March 2009 05:13
I can finally take a breath now. You're not evil now that my heart rate is coming back down to normal.

Thank you for the fantastic story. You're a compelling storyteller and have the characterizations down to the last molecule.

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