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Kith and Kin - Part VI

Wednesday, March 11, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. Simon struggles to save Mal's life, and Hank has a conversation with the bad guys. NEW CHAPTER (for those who didn't want to have to wait ...)

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Freya could hear a rushing in her ears, and Simon’s voice seemed to come from a long way off.

“His heart’s stopped.”

No. This couldn’t be happening. Not this. Not now.

Everything slowed, the light photons losing their impetus, and taking an age to reach her. Simon was putting the defibrillator paddles on Mal’s chest, making sure everyone was clear, then pressing the buttons.

Mal lifted from the bed slowly, as if he was about to overcome gravity and float towards the ceiling, but he fell back, bouncing a little.

“Again.” The word was slurred, spread out, not seeming to come from Simon’s mouth, but hanging in the air independently, each letter neon and empty smoke.

Mal jerked, reminding her inexorably of the time back with Niska, as the Quicksilver infiltrated between the molecules of his skin … Her knees threatened to buckle.

“Got it.”

Sound thundered back, a wave that threatened to deafen her as the beeping of the heart monitor registered, not particularly steady, but there.

“Simon?” she managed to say, her mouth dry.

“We’ve got him back.”

She could feel it. The words he hadn’t said. “But …”

River was busy collecting equipment, laying it on one of the small steel tables, her pace measured, but fast.

“We can’t wait.” Simon turned to his sister. “Can you –“

“What you need. Before you ask.”

“I don’t have –“

“I know where they are.” She ran out of the infirmary.

“What are you saying?” Zoe asked, certain she knew but nevertheless needing to hear the words.

“I have to operate. There’s no choice now.”

“Can’t it wait? I mean, we’ll be on Boros in –“

“And Mal will be dead. I'm sorry, but that’s the bottom line. I can’t keep doing what I just did, it will damage the cardiac muscles.” Even as he spoke he’d filled a hypogun with a measured amount of anaesthetic, injecting it into Mal’s neck. “He won’t make it, Zoe.”

She gazed at him, then nodded curtly. “What can we do?”

“Nothing. River will assist. Just try and keep whoever they are out o

Comments
Wednesday, 11 March 2009 17:37
I am holding on with baited breath here. You are so evil with your cliffhangers. :)
Wednesday, 11 March 2009 17:56
*Wode ma*, are you going to make anything else go wrong? Where the hell are Jayne and the Shepherd? I hope Frey and Zoe get ready to repell all boarders with grenades and whatever else they can get their gorram hands on. Take no prisoners. No way should they give up an inch, if the enemy crew are cutting their way in then it gives our BDHs to take up position to send as many to hell as they can as soon as they try to come in. I think throwing the grenades through the first opening they see would be a good move. Ali D
Hoping you don't kill Mal just because you can...
Wednesday, 11 March 2009 21:13
Cliffy .. cliffy .. cliffy!! Man, gotta love 'em. Waiting on baited breath for more. x3
Anna.x.(:
Thursday, 12 March 2009 00:52
Thank you very much for not keeping us hanging - I think. But does the phrase out of the frying pan and into the fire mean anything to you? Wow. Poor Kaylee - that is not a sight for the faint of heart or weak of stomach or the heavily pregnant. I think that no matter how vengeful that pirate crew think they are, they have no idea the wrath that is about to hit them in the form of Serenity's crew. Great job once again. I really enjoyed the pacing of switching to Hank's point of view, then Kaylee's point of view, before the true horror of Simon's situation becomes clear to the reader. Very creative and very very well done. Unfortunately for Mal, you have a real gift for putting him in the hot seat. Looking forward to more!
Thursday, 12 March 2009 01:58
As usual I bring up rear and everyone was eloquent, including you, Jayne. BTW my heart stopped too.
WOONSOCKET
Thursday, 12 March 2009 21:31
Ok, I was wrong, last chapter's cliffhanger was not nearly as precipitous as this one.

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