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Kith and Kin - Part V

Tuesday, March 10, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. Simon finds out the reason behind Mal's heart attack, and the bad guys move in for the kill. NEW CHAPTER

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For the hundredth time since Mal collapsed, Simon glanced over at him lying on the medbed. He was still asleep, and Freya was dozing next to him, her head pillowed on her crossed arms. The after effects of all the tension and worry had finally caught up with her, and as much as she wanted to stay awake, to keep watch over him, her body had rebelled. She still had her hand wrapped around his, though.

Simon half-smiled. There were times when Serenity’s captain could annoy him like no other man alive, but he rather wanted to keep it that way. Quickly checking the monitors on the wall above him, he ascertained there had been no deterioration in Mal’s condition, so turned back to the tests.

His little blood analyser had been working overtime. With the kits River had found in the crates he’d managed to rule out a number of possible causes, some obvious, some not. It wasn’t even as if Mal’s lifestyle could really have caused the attack, since most days they didn’t have access to high cholesterol foods, or an over-abundance of salt or sugar.

Indeed, for a man who seemed to take little exercise apart from occasionally working out on Jayne’s weights, and running from the law and villains alike, he was in remarkably good condition. Perhaps it was having a wife like Freya. Although, come to think of it, Simon really didn’t want to go down that mental route.

“Doc?” Zoe’s voice, kept low to avoid waking the patient, or his wife, had him turning.

He held up a hand, checking once more on Mal, then walked out of the infirmary to join her. “I’m presuming we’re on our way to Boros.”

Serenity’s first mate nodded. “Yes. Hank’s keeping an eye out for Alliance boats, seeing if maybe they’ll be closer, but it looks like we’re just going to have to wait it out.” Her eyes strayed to the man on the bed. “How is he?”

“Holding his own.”

“Are you any closer to finding out why this happened?”

“Not yet. Although by ruling out a number of possibilities, I suppose in a way …” He shrugged.

Zoe nodde

Comments
Tuesday, 10 March 2009 18:24
Can't have cliffhanger placed here and then wait for few days for resolution. Need more story now!

Wow, you really planned this to all come together nicely - being angry at Niska, old revenge against Zoe, guilt with Hank and Simon - quite the angst fest. Glad there was a good explanation for Mal's problem and a nice tight plot line with it. Loving this and looking forward to more.
Tuesday, 10 March 2009 18:48
!!!!!!!
Mal!Mal!Mal!Mal!Mal! OMG!!
*back in normal town*
Mal'll survive, won't he? He has to, doesn't he? Yeah, Simon'll resuscitate him (Y) && what has Zoe ever done to those guys, I wonder? Hurmmmm ...
Anna.x.(:
Tuesday, 10 March 2009 19:38
Hyper ventilating--- hyper ventilating---I am putting all my trust in you that you are not going to kill Mal off...

Eager to see exactly why these guys are gunning for Zoe... but I don't think they are going to be happy when she kicks their pi-gu's!

Looking forward to more.. soon, right. Your going to post more soon? Not leave us hanging with this?? :)
Tuesday, 10 March 2009 22:37
Wow! Trust it to be something hanging on from what that *tamade hundan* Niska did to Mal. Pity we can't kill him again. Just don't let Mal die! And why is their pursuer so all fired filled with hatred for Zoe? I'm thinking he needs a visit up close and personal with Vera. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 11 March 2009 00:13
So out to get Zoe. Mal is screwed up by Niska...so what's next?! ;) I'm sure you have a wild ride all ready planned...
Wednesday, 11 March 2009 00:51
Let Mal be okay!!!!!
Wednesday, 11 March 2009 03:30
Jane! I recall your motto: faster would be better!!!!! Disturbingly believable on the biology of Mal's heart trouble.
~freeverse
Wednesday, 11 March 2009 04:30
This rollercoaster is going down hill fast and post the next chapter even faster!
WOONSOCKET
Thursday, 12 March 2009 21:23
This has all been very believable! And with a cliffhanger worthy of Jane alone.

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