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Kith and Kin - Part IV

Saturday, March 7, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. In which the crew finds out what's wrong with Mal, and there is a hint of more trouble on the horizon. NEW CHAPTER

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Zoe sat on the bridge and stared out at the stars. Not that she saw them. Her mind was elsewhere, back on Persephone, replaying the events of the pick-up. She was positive she’d never met Fisher before, even though Freya was insistent the man at least knew her name. She never forgot a face, and while her memory for the minutiae had never been as good as Mal’s, Fisher was a stranger to her.

She shook her head slightly. She’d always been slightly jealous of the way Mal was capable of remembering details of other folk’s lives that she hadn’t picked up on. Even in the war, when he had a shifting and changing platoon under him, then almost a brigade towards the end, he could still recall if someone was married, what their wife’s name was, how many kids they had, and would talk to any of the grunts that needed it, showing he cared. Maybe it was a trick, although she doubted it, but she wished she knew how he did it.

“Okay,” Hank said, coming up behind her and pulling the seat around to face him. “No moping.”

“Ain’t moping.”

“Then whatever it is you’re doing.”

“Taking the watch.”

“Honey, Serenity’s autopilot is more’n capable of making sure we don’t hit something.” He grinned. “It’s time to play.”

She raised one eyebrow. “Play?”

“Yeah.” He grabbed her hand. “Come on. You’re on my team.”

“Hank …”

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Jayne watched her sometimes, when he thought she didn’t know. Wasn't very often, since she nearly always turned to look at him, a smile lighting her pale face as she fixed her dark eyes on him. But occasionally, when she was thinking about something else, or maybe a hundred something elses, he would catch her unawares, and wonder at how the ‘verse could reward a bad man like him with something as good as her.

He was under no illusions. No matter he and Matty had made it up, that he’d managed to spend some quality time with his Ma before she died, he knew what he was. What he was always going to be. But maybe he could be something else as well, and that he owed to a slip

Comments
Saturday, 07 March 2009 22:30
So, he wants Zoe dead? Maybe .. idk, I could be interpreting this wrong. Hurmmm ... Mall'll be fine tho, if he's not you're sure to have a riot on your hands ..
Anna.x.(:
Sunday, 08 March 2009 14:38
Why does he want Zoe dead? Ahhh the mystery?

And Mal needs to be OK. Dong ma?
Sunday, 08 March 2009 23:44
Ooooh this is getting good.
Monday, 09 March 2009 02:23
So knowing that this isn't going to turn out as straightforward as it seems, what have you got up your sleeve? New virus attacking heart valves? Poor Zoe - at the center of the storm and no one sees it coming.
Monday, 09 March 2009 09:22
I can't help but feel that Mal's heart condition was induced. If he had a weak heart our valiant Captain wouldn't have survived half the things he gets into but I'm pegging my hopes on River or Frey spotting the source and Simon putting it right. Just not sure how close you're going to cut this. Also, it sounds as if there is a tracker on the ship or attached to the cargo and given the conversation at the end it makes me think there is something really dodgy about the job. Hope River and Frey stay sharp enough to keep an eye out for trouble. And don't kill Mal. You really wouldn't like the nine hells you would end up in if you killed him, *dong ma*? Great work as always, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 11 March 2009 00:12
Okay, so I am trying hard to keep breathing. I know you said you wouldn't break him so I am trusting you, but this is getting good and scary and me likes it. Going to read five now!!

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