Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Kith and Kin - Part III

Thursday, March 5, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. The pick-up goes ahead, but nobody's happy. NEW CHAPTER

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3661    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

Tweet

The rain had all but stopped by the pick-up time approached, the sky clearing to leave a quilt of stars beginning to appear as the sun dropped over the horizon.

“It’s going to get cold tonight, sir,” Zoe said quietly, standing in the lea of the shuttle, the last few drops of water splashing down into the mud.

“Been colder.” Mal pulled his scarf tighter around his neck.

“New Casmir,” Freya put in. “Now that was cold.”

“St Alban’s was worse,” Mal said. “Gets into a man’s bones, cold like that.” He paused a moment, then spoke quietly, his tone different. “Jayne, you in place?”

“Sure are,” they heard over their earwigs. “Got a good range of fire, too. If you come in from the west, you won’t be in the way either.”

“Got that.” He looked at his first mate and his wife and sketched a smile. “Ladies? Shall we?”

---

There was still enough light in the sky to pick their way through the trees, but that was dying fast by the time they got to the rendezvous. As they approached the clearing, Mal stumbled but righted himself quickly, kicking at a non-existent rock as if that had tripped him. No time to be showing weakness, he told himself. Simon did say it was going to take a couple of days to feel better, but right now he was counting the seconds. It didn’t help that he knew Freya had her eyes on him, boring right between his shoulder blades.

A man stepped out from the shadows, a lantern turned down to almost nothing in his hand, barely making an imprint on the evening. Two other men were at his back, and Zoe took a pace away to cover their rear if need be, her hand ready to draw her Mare’s Leg at any sign of trouble.

Two more , Mal heard, Freya’s voice caressing his mind, almost but not quite concealing her concern for him. In the trees to the left.

He tried to see, but all he could make out were dark shapes that might or might not be men. Not that he didn’t believe her – sometimes it was so handy to be married to a Reader. Not good placement ,

Comments
Thursday, 05 March 2009 14:48
This is getting scary, but at least you are leaving an angst trail to follow with medical supplies. Interesting how fear of the future can make you paralyzed to inaction or angry and ineffective.
WOONSOCKET
Thursday, 05 March 2009 15:08
Nicely done. Brant Fisher seems extremely interesting. If there's nothing in the cargo, then is it the coordinates or the journey that is the trap.
Nice contrast between Simon's medical knowledge and Kaylee's mechanics/sneakiness.
Thursday, 05 March 2009 15:47
ok.. chap 1 was good.. chap 2 was gooder.. and chap 3 ... Im hooked..
a little more river would be interesting... Feed me..:)
Thursday, 05 March 2009 20:27
Ummmmm....okay, I'm breathing and trusting and.....calming down knowing she would not kill off our Mal. ;) Great as always.
Thursday, 05 March 2009 20:33
Mal?? My brain is whirring with so many possibilities ... I wonder whats up ..
Anna.x.(:
Friday, 06 March 2009 01:13
Brilliant chapter but oh my, I am so worried for Mal. It's like he thinks he has a cancer or somesuch but it is scary that Simon doesn't know what is wrong. I am used to him pulling so many metaphorical rabbits out of his medical hat that something like this reminds you of the fear of the unknown. And as for Brant, I'm thinking the job is the hook to get Mal and the crew to that destination. I hope everyone is on the ball and that Jayne takes LOTS of grenades with him in case they have a welcoming party. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Post Your Comments

You must log in to post comments.