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Dead Man's Chest - Part XVI

Sunday, February 22, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. Dan persuades Zoe that the others are in danger. NEW CHAPTER

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He knew he was going to have bruises, but knocking on the cargo bay door was the only way he could figure of letting them know he wanted in. If he’d been sensible, of course, he would have gone back to the office, waved, or maybe even jogged to Gilford’s and used the Cortex link there. If he’d been sensible. Trouble was, he had the feeling the time for being sensible had just about run out.

Lifting his hand to bang again he paused, getting the distinct feeling that someone was just inside.

The small door creaked open, and he was met with a hand holding what suspiciously looked like a Mare’s Leg.

“Don’t shoot!” he said quickly, stepping back so the person with their finger on the trigger could see him clearly. “It’s Dan Jefferson.”

The tall, dark-skinned beauty he recognised as Zoe Mills appeared in the doorway. “Sheriff.” Odd how her gun hadn’t moved though.

He wasted no time on pleasantries. “Where’s Mal Reynolds?”

-

“Well, this is an interesting development,” Mal said, his hands raised.

He and Freya had exited the tunnel into the bright Ezra sun, but despite their best efforts hadn’t seen the men hiding either side of the entrance until they felt cold metal pressed into their necks.

“Sorry,” Freya said, her own arms likewise lifted. I didn’t feel them in time. Jayne’s still projecting.

“Not your fault. I figure this is just one of those things we can’t do a thing about.” I didn’t see ‘em either, ai ren. Light was in my eyes.

“I'm still sorry.”

“Then you can apologise in private later.” He flashed her a smile.

Chester Lau stared at them. Despite the fact that his men had divested them of their firearms in short order, they still looked far too comfortable, as if this sort of thing happened a lot. Perhaps it did. “Captain Reynolds,” he said to get their attention.

“That’s me.” Mal turned to the man standing in front of them, trying for friendly. “Chester Lau, isn’t it?”

“I am.”

“And your brothers.” Mal nodded at the other two men,

Comments
Sunday, 22 February 2009 19:06
We don't really mind your cliffhangers, it's just that you do them a little too well, and leave us with an anxiety attack until the next posting. That results in adrenal fatigue and a hyperactive stress response, meaning tired and crabby until you post again. But other than that, we LOVE cliffhangers! Especially yours. Very glad Dan is not corpsified - yet. They gotta have new old friends to visit, don't they?
Monday, 23 February 2009 02:28
I agree with Katesfriend. We don't dislike your cliffhangers, but it does give us a heartattack on ocassion! I am glad to see good old Dan will be around long after this is done. He is a great character to revisit in the future. I also like the way I hold my breath at each word I read. And the last few lines had me spitting out my coffee!!
Monday, 23 February 2009 04:35
All I can say is the same. We love cliffhangers and they increase the sale of heartburn medicine.

I'm also sure that's not the last we'll see of the Laus and I'm sure that they'll get their just reward some day.
Monday, 23 February 2009 11:25
While I am really happy that none of our heroes got corpsified by those Lau brothers it irks that they took the gold coins and got away with a nice little haul, AND still hold a grudge! It would be poetic justice if it turned out that the coins were fake. - Ali D :~)
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