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Dead Man's Chest - Part XV

Thursday, February 19, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. The Arc shuttle is explored, and the Laus meet up. NEW CHAPTER (and another cliffhanger!)

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“Do you really think they’ve found something?” Jarrett asked, following his brother towards the tunnel entrance, the other men spreading out to cover them.

“Well, they’ve not come out. What do you think?” Aiden scanned the surrounding area. “There’s mines and all sorts around here. Maybe they’ve come across an untapped seam.”

“So what do we do?”

Something groaned in the darkness ahead of them, sounding all too suspiciously like a wooden prop shifting.

Aiden licked his lips and said, “I think we wait. They’ve gotta come out again.”

Jarrett nodded hard. “Yeah. I think so too.” He sat down on a convenient boulder, the sweat dripping from his straight black bangs to stain his yellow shirt.

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The main access to the shuttle was open, but only just. Jayne tried to force it, but even his strength wasn't enough.

“Help me,” he said, and the other two men put their shoulders against the hatch. It squealed loudly, the sound filling the cavern, but its old metal couldn’t withstand their combined assault. It tore from its upper hinges, falling back and leaving enough room to get through.

“It doesn’t look like Ingleby got this far,” Simon said.

“Nope,” Mal agreed. “So maybe we’ll be in luck and find something. Maybe even beyond our wildest dreams.”

“I don’t know, Mal,” Jayne said, forcing his bulk through the opening. “I got some pretty wild dreams.”

“Thanks, but I don’t think I wanna know.” He followed, while Simon stood back to allow the River and Freya to precede him.

Their torch beams illuminated an airlock like that on Serenity, only smaller, but this time the doorway at the back was open. The inky darkness inside was complete.

“Okay,” Mal said, swallowing slightly. “Now I know I ain’t claustrophobic like Hank, but … everyone stay together.”

“You thinking there might be ghosts?” Jayne joked, but River silenced him with a hand on his arm.

“Always are,” she whispered, keeping as far away from the metalwork as she could.

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“Shit.” Jarrett, who had bee

Comments
Thursday, 19 February 2009 23:14
Uh oh, don't like the way River's head snapped up at the end. Just hope Frey and Mal are really quiet and careful as they go to see who is waiting for them outside. And where in the nine hells is Dan? Did the Sheriff get waylaid AGAIN? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 19 February 2009 23:41
GRAVE? :O No no no no no no no no ... that sounds bad. :S
Irrevocably hooked now.
Anna.x.(:
Friday, 20 February 2009 01:33
Mumble mumble gorram cliffhangers. Really wondering what's coming next. Really don't like this set of bad guys, but your description of the power play between the brothers was intense and very believable when sibling rivalry is an issue. Very well done.
Friday, 20 February 2009 01:54
Oh goody, the bad guys are squabbling, the crew is divided and River is going on about graves. What a good cliff=hanger.
Friday, 20 February 2009 02:55
The 'Queen' is at it again....So drop us off that proverbial cliff again and leave us hangin by a thumb nail....

So we have graves, a crew split, and 'pirates' fighting...sounds like the perfect treasure story, just waiting for the Black Pearl...oh, wait that's another story, but it had hot men in it, too...well, I'm ready for the next bit and hopefully, my thumb won't break before then....

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