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Dead Man's Chest - Part XIV

Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal and the others finally find what they're looking for, but someone's looking for them too. NEW CHAPTER

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Jayne had been right. In a little over an hour Mal parked the Mule under the towering rocks known as Huo Yan Shan , or the Mountain of Flames.

“You think they were just being poetical on account of its shape, or is there more to it?” he asked, staring up at the heights as Jayne scouted around. It did look something like a fire, he considered, if he squinted and put his head on one side. Something massive must have hit here, or there was intense seismic activity at some time in the past, maybe during terraforming, but whatever it was had pushed huge plates of base rock up into the sky, where the incessant wind had scoured the softer elements from it, leaving splinter points all along the edges.

“Probably a touch of both,” Freya said, bending down and picking up a scrap of something sharp, the hard shine catching her eye in the sun. “Obsidian,” she added, running her thumb across it, feeling the edge scraping at her skin. “It only gets created in very high temperatures.”

“Volcanic eruptions,” River supplied. “Polymerized lava,” she went on. “No crystal growth.”

“Right,” Mal said, as if he’d understood every word.

“Actually, River’s right,” Simon put in. “And because of the way it’s formed obsidian has been used to make scalpel blades of almost molecular thickness.”

“Just what I needed to know.”

Freya smiled, tossing the chip towards the doctor. “Present for you then, Simon.”

The young man let it fall to the ground before picking it up, as always wary of damaging the fingers that so often had to dig bullets out of the crew. “Thank you so much,” he said witheringly.

Mal’s lips twitched. “If you don’t want it, I'm sure Bethie’ll take it off your hands for you.”

Simon shook his head, well aware of the magpie-ish collecting tendencies of his eldest daughter. “Please, don’t encourage her.”

“I don’t think she needs any encouragement.”

“Mal.” Jayne had reappeared and was pointing towards the base of the rock formation.

“Cave?” Mal asked, looking at Freya.

“Cave

Comments
Wednesday, 18 February 2009 14:23
First comment! Now this looks like one plan that could have gone smooth, Jayne's pants aside, except for the junior lurking Laus and the unstable tunnelry, that is... It almost sounded as if the sheriff took a bit of Mal's marital advice. Hope he alerts the BDH's in time. Can they get ahold of just a little bit of the hoard? Please? Even if Science (or the Alliance) does get most of it. Just no Indiana Jones collapsible finish.... I'm on the edge of my proverbial seat. Thanks for writing!
Wednesday, 18 February 2009 21:25
Well, now, this sounds like a plan and a half with maybe a good chance of an actual success without too much gun fire...that is if Jayne and Mal can handle that...LOL!! I also hope the BDHs get a littl bit of the treasure at least for improvements and a bit of merry making.....good as always...
Wednesday, 18 February 2009 23:00
I'm puzzled why our little Reader isn't picking up any hint of the danger lurking. Even when she turned her head and looked in the direction the Laus were observing them from not a flicker. Lucky the sheriff is more switched on and it struck me as typical that just when he has a reason to hurry the world and his literal wife keep delaying him. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 19 February 2009 03:03
Great job! Loving where this is going and love the fact that Jayne can still gross Mal out. Loved Mal's joke about hoping it was all a narcotic hallucination. Looking forward to when they're all rich.
Thursday, 19 February 2009 05:25
Jayne is always, well, Jayne. I'm loving this story so far...but waiting for the inevitable problems courtesy of the Lau's and the tunnels.

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