Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Reunion - 5 of 9

Wednesday, February 11, 2009

Part 5. Post-BDM (8 years post, actually); all the characters belong to Joss, and the idea for the story was handed to me by my Dadoo, who said he didn't have time to write it, so would i do it for him. i said yes. we still hope you enjoy.

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The big glowy thing was talking again. It was saying words, but the words were muffled, like she was underwater, which didn't make any sense because if she was under the water, she shouldn't be able to breathe. Also, the words were behind her...and they sounded so familiar...maybe the big glowy thing was talking through cotton - crates and crates of it. If that were true, though, there should be a warehouse of cotton around her, and that wasn't quite it, either. She felt confined, but the fabric wasn't cottonish...it was just...heavy. And if she were in a warehouse, then the balcony should have overlooked crates and barrels and warehousey things...not men in silver-blue jumpsuits.

Maybe she was underwater, River thought again. And those weren't men in jumpsuits, but minnows. Maybe this was how minnows saw the world around them. But if that was the case, why was the big glowy thing talking to her?

And why did it sound like Mal swearing?

Something was off...River shook her head once more to try to clear the cottony water from her head... Jayne was watching the big glowy thing, too, his thoughts slow like molasses...River wanted pancakes suddenly, and turned to tell Mal, but saw Simon rambling with the barest of coherence at a slightly confused man in a blue-black suit that glinted weirdly in the light. Confusions were spilling out of his ears and River suddenly knew there was something wrong again. She could still hear Mal swearing, but when she looked at him, his mouth was closed tight. He glanced at her, his eyes widened and all his curses became one, very focused word, followed by a clarity of mind so sharp River was certain he would cut himself with it.

"Doctor, I'm sure your discussion of these cases are all quite fascinatin'," Mal said out loud, clearing some of the fog in River's head. "But we have our schedule to keep. Wouldn't want Belix to get to wonderin'. They don't have such a fancy set up to ease worries and the like."

"Of course, you're right," Simon replied hastily. "And I can send a

Comments
Thursday, 12 February 2009 00:50
Great job! Loved lovable, fluffy stupefied Jayne's reaction to Mal. The flashback to Mal/Inara in River's head was a nice way to integrate so much information in such a small space - very clever. Please let them get there before Zoe goes postal.
Thursday, 12 February 2009 01:06
Eep, I haven't been commenting.

I like how the other inmates were affecting River, making her loopy as well. Surreal narrative.

I hope they don't get there and Zoe's gone and done a fool thing. ._. Mal's going to be somewhat pissed if she's gotten herself killed before they get there.
WOONSOCKET
Thursday, 12 February 2009 02:36
I haven't been commenting on the other chapters, although I have been reading, and your narrative is wonderful. You do a really nice job capturing the characters and also their interactions, especially considering that 8 years have passed.
Thursday, 12 February 2009 05:28
Another good chapter with vivid descriptions, especially of Zoe flying into action

River’s memories of Mal’s and Inara’s evolving relationship and Mal’s sheer desperation as the end came near, simple and brilliant work

Looking for more
Thursday, 12 February 2009 17:14
Are we about to see the 'REAL' Zoe?
Can't wait!

anxious4more


Thursday, 12 February 2009 23:35
Laughed at Jayne, applauded Simon's quick thinking, got teary eyed at the memories of Mal and Inara's doomed relationship ... how much more can you pack into one chapter? Oh, yes, Zoe possibly doing something very stupid. Good story!
Friday, 13 February 2009 23:14
I just love this. Marshmallow-headed River coming out in sympathy with a still drugged Jayne and Zoe finally getting back to the warrior women we have come to know and love. This is a very fine story, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

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