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Dead Man's Chest - Part IX

Monday, February 2, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. After the trial and other various tribulations, the crew look forward to the pre-wedding party. But things never quite go smooth ... NEW CHAPTER (oh, and some Maya fluff for AMDOBELL ...)

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The next morning, far too early for civilised folks to be up, especially considering the activities of the day before, River ran through Serenity, pounding on all the doors. “Time to get up!” she shouted. “Time to party!”

Down in the captain’s cabin, Mal growled. “If she don’t shut up I’m gonna …”

“What?” Freya asked, raising herself up onto her elbow to look at him. “Put her out the airlock? Suggest she does the septic vat for the foreseeable? You really have a death wish or something?”

“Who from? Her?”

“Or Jayne. Or both.” She chuckled lightly.

“I’d’ve thought being a mother might’ve slowed her down.” Mal pushed his hand through his hair, making it stand on end.

“No sign of it so far.” She leaned forward slightly, moving his shirt to one side and kissing the soft skin just above his collar bone.

“Couldn’t you talk to her?” He shivered at her touch. “You know, seeing how she looks on you.”

“What about you?” The kissing had turned to licking, just the tip of her tongue pressing into the indentation. “You’re her yan qin .”

“No, I ain’t. That’d make Jayne my son-in-law, and I ain’t having that.” His breath hitched. “ Ai ren , I think you’re gonna have to hold that thought. Least for the time being. I need to shower if I’m gonna be anywhere near presentable for this here shindig.”

“We’ve got plenty of time. No-one expects us until lunchtime.” Her lips fastened on his neck.

“Yeah, but –“

She slid across him, her thighs opening around his hips. “You fell asleep last night,” she pointed out.

“I was tired!”

“I wasn’t.”

“So I'm supposed to give in to your … wuh de mah … to your advances whenever you feel … feel like it?” The way she was nibbling his ear was making him lose concentration, and the silver Firefly around her neck was pressing into his chest next to the gold cross she’d given him.

“Absolutely.” Her breath made his skin tingle.

Without thinking, his hands came up and held onto her waist. “You’re a terrible woman,” he

Comments
Monday, 02 February 2009 20:04
Yay! More good stuff From Jane.

I love these chapters where we get to see the crew being just people instead of BDH's.

Brian
Monday, 02 February 2009 21:49
I just love when our BDHs get to be regular people. Jane was so good in this. He's such a good hubby and daddy. Oh, and of course, Mal was quite awesome, too.
WOONSOCKET
Monday, 02 February 2009 22:30
Dozens of little vignettes of the crew being people, being family. Nice touch.
Tuesday, 03 February 2009 00:32
Yay, Jane0904, some MAYA and all for me! You can't see me but I am doing a happy dance with the biggest smile on my face you ever did see. I love how much goodness you crammed into this chapter, the wonderful moments between Mal and Frey, then Kaylee and Simon, and Hank and his son shaving was wonderful. Also loved Jayne and River and all the children, so very shiny. I knew something would have to happen and wonder if the man who turned up uninvited at the end has been shot or is just drunk. Very funny how so many of the crew pulled a gun on him though. *Xie xie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 03 February 2009 01:53
I think everyone has said everything so here's another "Well Done!"
Tuesday, 03 February 2009 13:00
Loved Mal's reluctance to party and Bethie's discovery of the facts of canine mortality. And of course you had to leave it on a cliffhanger - thanks!

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