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Starfall - Chapter 1

Sunday, January 25, 2009

River has a secret admirer, Mal's good day goes bad, and guess who's related to who?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1971    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Chapter1:

Dear Samurai,

You didn't look too good the last time you waved me. I hope you're holding out well, and I honestly mean that. Would I be sending you this info if I didn't? Well, that's for you to decide. In the end, I suppose it's better if you trust no one, especially those of us on the inside.

Here's everything you asked for: Project Farsight, Project Demolition, and Project Spartan. And yes, I did manage to get that one other thing you asked for. No idea why you'd want it... Agent Priest's been off the grid for more than three years.

If you can ever figure out how he managed to actually disappear so well that we couldn't find him... well I guess you wouldn't tell me.

But hey, I'm here for you, anytime. Really.

Regards,

Phantom 437

******

Agent Samurai looked at the sword that had given him his nickname. His actual designation had been Agent Stonewall, but no one had used that name, except in official documents, since Agent Samurai had adopted that sword. No one else used a sword. And after what he had done, no one else ever would. It would invite unwanted attention from higher-ups.

He smiled to himself. Every other agent had used either a gun, or a soundstick. He shivered. Those tiny sonic agents of death gave him chills. Operatives were only sent to kill those who had accomplished remarkable things... things worthy of an honorable death.

Bleeding to death from your ears while having your brain turned to jelly was not an honorable way to die.

When Agent Samurai had taken up the sword, his superiors were understandably concerned. The sword had at first appeared to embody a dangerous affirmation of independence, of individuality. He had to work hard to give that sword a different meaning.

That sword became the symbol of the most dedicated Operative that the Alliance had ever trained.

That thought made him smile again. He would use that sword to destroy the Alliance. That masterful bit of irony spelled the end of his former superiors' lives.

Agent Samurai looked

Comments
Sunday, 25 January 2009 05:05
Wooo!!! Interesting start!!!

I like how this one is starting.
Sunday, 25 January 2009 06:25
Ooh, Book revelations. And not the apocalypse kind (maybe)!
Sunday, 25 January 2009 10:48
A good start. Funnily enough I am more intrigued about what Foreman is going to do next and who *he* really is especially with River being the only one who is supposedly safe from her. Be interesting to see what is in that data packet about Book, though much of it I think Mal will have suspected anyway. At least, up to the part where the Operative thinks he was his father. Hmm, had a "Star Wars" moment then with Darth Vader and Luke... Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 25 January 2009 14:16
Very interesting! I liked your characterizations very much and your River speak was great. Loved River's definition of Mal's good day. Thanks for sharing!
Sunday, 25 January 2009 14:25
Think all the good stuff was said. Very good.
Sunday, 25 January 2009 15:00
Eagerly awaiting continuing revelations. Welcome to the site! ~freeverse
Monday, 26 January 2009 17:53
Ooohhh... this is all kinds of Shiny! Great start. I am so intrigued.
Tuesday, 27 January 2009 08:48
Nice start. And an interesting take on the Operative ...
HISBAOBEI
Saturday, 14 February 2009 21:26
The Operative here is spot on, both in quotations and characterization. You know how to set up and punch your plot elements. I am happily intrigued!

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