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Dead Man's Chest - Part IV

Monday, January 12, 2009

Maya. Post-BDM. Jayne and Matty talk, Bethie gains a new possession, and the man in the desert finds ... something. NEW CHAPTER

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He’d lost track of time. He could have been digging for a day, or a month, or a thousand years, and it would still have felt the same. He was too far from the entrance to see if it was sunlight or stars outside, and the darkness, broken only by the light from the lamp next to him, wrapped around him, touching his skin at all points, fighting for possession with the dirt encrusted into his flesh.

He’d only paused for a protein bar when the hunger pangs got too bad, and for a mouthful of water that made the whispers louder and more insistent, almost fighting with each other for control of him.

Swinging his spade into the wall of earth in front of him, he almost overbalanced as the edge met no resistance. His face splitting into a rictus grin, he attacked the remaining dirt, seeing it fall away in front of him until there was nothing but a gaping mouth of black.

He picked up the lamp, leaning through the hole and letting the thin light wash through.

There. There it was, resting in all its glory, the marks of its passage hidden beneath fallen rocks and damaged supports. It looked whole, complete, at least from this side, but even he could tell it would never fly again. The thrusters were damaged out of all recognition, and the flight planes buckled.

He walked forwards, stumbling on debris but ignoring it, until he was up against the hull, his face pressed against the cold metal. His fingertips outlined the flag painted there, scored by a thousand micro-meteorites but still visible, a version not seen for almost half a millennium, and he sighed in utter completeness.

“Mine,” he murmured, and the voices in his head cheered silently with him.

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Friday dawned clear and cool, the crew of Serenity waking slowly in their various beds. Mal thought he was the first one up, but he could smell coffee brewing in the kitchen, and as he stepped down into the galley he realised River was behind the small counter, making breakfast.

“Ain’t it Jayne’s turn to burn stuff?” he asked, scratching his h

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WOONSOCKET
Monday, 12 January 2009 17:02
A colony ship, a box of Jayne's "trinkets", a sibling rivalry brewing (this has all the earmarks of one of Gary Larson's "trouble brewing" cartoons...), and a stag party to come. So many twisted strands you weave...it's soooo much fun watching them come together.
Monday, 12 January 2009 17:03
Oooo...what trickets are in that chest?! This was so good. I loved the way Jayne talked to his Mama and the way Jayne volunteered a room on Serenity for his brother. More please....
Monday, 12 January 2009 21:00
I liked this slice of family life and smiled at River already knowing Jayne would be bringing Mattie back and getting a room ready for him. And tut, tut, Bethie, she has certainly inherited her mother's curiosity, or as the Aussie's say, 'sticky beak'. Lucky there is nothing in the box that Jayne wants to keep secret. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 13 January 2009 04:41
Why am I thinking about Pandora's box? I can't wait myself to see what's inside but I know you have "something" going on.

And the stag party. I know it'll be good.
Wednesday, 14 January 2009 00:39
Definately getting that Pandora feeling. And why is Bethie so cross at Ethan et al.? Just pre-kindergarten angst, or is somthing else going on, a redsidual of the Big Damn Adventure?

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