Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

As It Should Be

Sunday, December 28, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. A standalone, set a little way into the future of my Maya stories, but not really relevant. I just do these once in a while to get my muse going, so here - before the next tale starts - is Mal going home.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3770    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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He wondered if he was going crazy, only it that was the case, it should have happened a long time ago. Still, walking up the dirt track towards the house, feeling the sun at his back, the breeze in his face, he had to admit it was a pretty good hallucination. Even down to the sound of the dogs barking in the distance from the herd he could see creating a dust cloud some way off.

Sticking his thumbs into his pockets he tried for nonchalance as he approached the veranda. He coughed slightly, making the woman there look up.

“Mal.”

“Ma.”

“It ain’t time.”

“Not of my choosing, Ma.”

“You sure about that?” Alice Reynolds sat back in the old rocker, on the porch that didn’t exist anymore, and resumed shelling peas, dropping them into the blue and white bowl in her lap.

“Is this what you do?” he asked, curiosity getting the better of him. “Chores?”

“What else is there to do? Things need doing, so you do them.”

“But this is heaven, isn’t it?”

She smiled at him. “Is it?”

“Well, it sure ain’t hell.” He turned to look around the landscape, at the sun setting behind the mountains, and the soft sound of the creek not that far away.

“For a man that don’t believe you sure have a particular view of how things should be.” She picked up another bowl by her feet and held it out. “Here. ‘Stead of standing around being all philosophical, why don’t you give me a hand?”

He gazed at her, not a day older than when he was a boy, and considerably younger than when he walked away from the ranch for the last time. He grinned. “I’ve got to work, now?”

“Surely do.”

With a chuckle he sat down at her feet, setting the bowl between his thighs. “Green beans,” he said, shaking his head. “Ain’t had them in a long time. Frey’s not so keen on ‘em, and they’re not cheap, so we don’t tend to buy ‘em.”

“You used to love them. With gravy, and some of my biscuits.” She laughed. “I swear, you didn’t even care if there was meat, so long as you had the gravy and biscuits.”

“How it should be,”

Comments
Sunday, 28 December 2008 19:02
This gets a "10" because there's nothing higher. Loved this glimpse into family ties that bind and the people and memories who make us what we are. Loved that Mal's constant draw towards home was what almost made him decide to stay. Loved Alice's jealousy that she was going to lose Mal back to Freya even though she knew he didn't belong there yet. The two girls together was a nice touch, as was including Book and Wash. Little Alice wondering if her parents thought about her was a heartbreaker. And your theme and your title - just perfect. Love all your ghost stories to bits!
Sunday, 28 December 2008 19:54
I don't comment as often as I should, but I love reading your stories, and this is one of the best! It's nice to think about all of them visiting each other and getting a chance to know each other after they've died.
Sunday, 28 December 2008 23:51
AWAWAWAWAWAWAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
That is all.
Anna.x.(:
Monday, 29 December 2008 00:38
Loved this to itty bitty pieces. I had tears in my eyes reading the first half then a great big smile on my face so big the top of my head almost fell off. Brilliant and so warm and uplifting too. It fits that Mal still believes even if he doesn't openly admit as much and it was moving that little Alice had gone to be with his folks in Heaven until the time is right for him and his to join them. Your Freya stories are the air I breathe - just lovely. *Xie xie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 29 December 2008 01:36
Tears, a warm smile and perfect.
Monday, 29 December 2008 01:57
I love the idea that our everyday loves and lives continue somehow. Thank you.

Been rereading Prospero's Legacy,and seeing how everything fits....

~freeverse
Monday, 29 December 2008 03:13
This is just such a wonderful story!! It brought tears to my eyes.

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