Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Hell in a Handbasket - Ch 9

Friday, December 19, 2008

The crew gets in place to save River and stop the ship from taking off. And things start going wrong... again.

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“Easy!” Simon carped as Zoë hefted him roughly across her shoulders and adjusted her grip on his wrist. The idea of carrying Simon between their shoulders had been hindered seriously by fact that Mal was a good bit taller than Simon or Zoë, but they were making do. Simon had been going in and out of consciousness for the entire walk from the shuttle and Mal wished like hell he’d just stay passed out. Then he could have his way and just toss Simon over his shoulder in a fireman’s carry.

“You’re awfully whiny for a hero,” Mal said.

“Stop calling me that.”

Simon killed a man to save Cole. Mal wasn’t soon to forget that or let it go unthanked.

“Aunt Kaylee calls him –”

“Hey!” Simon warned and Zoë bit back a snicker.

“Zo, there are some things men don’t want to know about other men,” Mal said.

He could see the hospital now, and he resisted the urge to speed up. Simon swooned and Mal reached across to catch his weight. They paused long enough to let him wake and catch his breath. Zoë wiped the sweat from her lip and leaned her hands on her knees, looking from Simon to the hospital door. The area was well-lit, considering the time of night, and the neighboring buildings shielded it somewhat from the wind.

“Why did we park so far?” she panted.

“Don’t you get whiny too,” Mal said.

“I’m sixteen, I can’t help it.”

Mal nudged Simon and Zoë took the cue. Once inside, they all gasped gratefully, inhaling lungs full of warm, clean air… and probably more than a few pathogens. Mal checked the directory and nodded to the left.

“Elevators are that way. Burn ward is on sixteen.”

“Don’t we need to check in first?” Zoë asked.

“I don’t like waiting.”

They entered the elevator and Simon swooned again. They were close enough to the destination that Mal didn’t mind throwing Simon over his shoulders. As soon as the elevator opened, Zoë dashed into the hall and found a bed. Mal followed her behind the curtain and laid Simon down carefully. Simon stirred almost immediately and started mumbling a l

Comments
Friday, 19 December 2008 03:30
VB, this s crazy intense, and strong writing. Keep it coming!

~freeverse
Friday, 19 December 2008 03:46
Loved this chapter. Keep up the good writin!!
Friday, 19 December 2008 13:40
>Confused, Jayne looked at Sky and she threw her arms up in frustration. “I am never going to get his ear!” Jayne chuckled and shook his head. A girl’s gotta have hobbies.

Oh, Jayne and Sky are so made for each other!

I'm glad Simon finally got the attention he needed, although as a doctor he was always going to wait until everyone else was seen to. Can't wait to read more!

Friday, 19 December 2008 16:10
I anxiously awaited new chapters, and you delivered! Excellent action sequences. This is amazaing. Keep it coming!

Saturday, 20 December 2008 03:48
I really love the relationship you have built between Mal and Zoe. Stringing the hospital research with the psychics is a very interesting plot twist in a kind of horrifying way. The relationships between the kids is really neat to see and I think I'm finally starting to understand Michael. Dynamic storyline and fascinating to read.
BUJGOFOGHTVEH
Saturday, 03 January 2009 01:13
Okay, that chocolate comment is one of the best non-canon Jayne lines I've seen.

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