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Prospero's Legacy - Part XXXX - Epilogue

Wednesday, December 17, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. A funeral. And a reunion. And a surprise. EPILOGUE

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“Soon?”

Bethie sighed. Jesse had been asking the same question for days, and as much as she wanted to tell the little girl to wait, she couldn’t. She wanted it to be now, her own self. “Soon,” she agreed.

Ethan looked up from the drawing he was doing as a surprise for his mother, and nodded. “Soon, Jesse.”

“How soon?”

“Soon soon.”

Soon soon soon?”

He smiled at his baby sister. “Yes.”

Jesse smiled widely, showing little white teeth. “Good.” She went back to tickling Fiddler’s belly as he lay on his back, one of his legs kicking in ecstasy as she found the right spot. She giggled.

Ethan looked at Bethie, who had an expression on her face far beyond her years. “I'm glad they’re coming for us,” he whispered. As much as he loved his Auntie ‘Nara, he wanted to have his Mama hold him, to show his Daddy how much he’d grown.

“Me too.” Bethie had seen, through her Auntie River and Auntie Freya, the small ceremony on Prometheus, when her grandpa was laid to rest. She knew she shouldn’t be sad, but there was a little hole in her heart somehow. She’d only known him a few hours, but he was her grandpa. She lay back and looked up at the ceiling of the nursery above them, but not seeing it as her mind went over the images again …

-

As much as all the crew wanted to see their children, that was going to have to wait until after a much more sombre task. The two ships put down high on the hill, waiting for Jayne and Hank to finish the digging, then everyone gathered at the grave site.

The warm breeze caught at River’s floaty dress as she stood next to her mother, Simon the other side, supporting Regan as Alex, Jayne, Breed and Dillon lowered Gabriel’s body into the ground.

“Should be raining,” Kaylee murmured, standing just to one side with Zoe and Freya. “Somehow, shouldn’t have funerals when the sun’s out.”

A butterfly wandered past, dipping on the gently moving air, captivating them for a moment before Mal’s voice broke into their reverie.

“I seem to have done

Comments
Wednesday, 17 December 2008 18:39
I am so glad you wrote 'Lots more to come', otherwise there could've been riots. Lovely little epilogue. Made me feel all happy inside. xD
Anna.x.(:
Wednesday, 17 December 2008 19:45
Oh Wow, happy dance, this was just PERFECT! I loved the way you didn't rush the ending and all the children had their little moment plus you actually gave Mal and Frey some time together, yay! Love that you have more Maya planned. Great writing, thanks. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 17 December 2008 22:45
You better have more to come, because i would have to threaten you with....ummmm...something fluffy, methinks. LOL!!

Great ending. It was so sweet and beautiful. I love the kids. They are just perfect.

Can't wait for the blog.
Thursday, 18 December 2008 01:05
Whew, glad the roller coaster ride is over and I'm all ready for another ride!

Sad (Gabriel's funeral),fluffy (the kids) and hot (Mal and Freya) all at the same time. And masterfully written.

If there's not more I'd have to send Jayne after you.
Thursday, 18 December 2008 03:11
Wow, what a wild ride. Masterfully done and the levels of suspense and fluff were perfect more maximum emoting. Love this story of their future on Prom and love how the kids are growing up. Simon was very believable aa the doctor and the father.
Thursday, 18 December 2008 14:06
Is this working?
Thursday, 18 December 2008 14:08
ok.. so yesterday I tried to comment and it wouldn't let me. so here goes. I am so happy to hear there will be more to read. I love the verse you have created and I can't wait to read more. This was an amazing story, one I looked forward to reading whenever there was a new segment. What a wonderful ending, can't wait to see what is next!
Friday, 19 December 2008 01:49
My compliments, Jane. This was an amazing arc! Glad to know there's more coming! :D
Monday, 29 December 2008 15:40
Just finished rereading this in full, and I'm in awe. Not to mention those subtle hints of more bad guys to come--multiple academies?! That should eat away at Freya's subconscious! BDR in future, we hope--- just think of the blow to the Alliance. Though maybe the less maniacal New Browncoats cod do the heavy lifting?

I loved the glimpse, also, into the other potentials across the 'verse, when Mara is waked. Picture Noni and Theo, infiltrating the Academy!

thank you, Jane.
Saturday, 04 April 2009 03:14
Wheeeew!!... Could not put this down. what a great meshing of complex emotions, action, comedy, drama, happiness and heartache bound by healing love. I'm Exhausted!!
I have felt no less reading Anne McCaffrey, Piers Anthony, or Joel Rosenberg, my personal favorites.

Well Done.
Well Done.



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