Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

First Kiss

Sunday, November 23, 2008

Maya. But future Maya. Very post-BDM. I know I should be writing PROSPERO'S LEGACY, but here is a little fun fluff to make up for the last ficlet. Enjoy!

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She was a year and a half older than him, and right now he didn’t exactly know what to do. He patted her arm ineffectually.

“It’s okay, Bethie. They’ll come for us.”

“I know,” she sniffed, wiping the tears from her cheeks with the back of her hand.

He swallowed, hard. He knew it was totally the wrong thing to be thinking, but in the last few months she’d really blossomed, and since her seventeenth birthday she’d become a really pretty girl. He corrected himself. Young woman.

She leaned against him, and he felt his muscles tense.

“I’m cold, Ethan,” she said, trying to snuggle down like she had when she was a child.

“Oh … okay.” With infinite care he wrapped his arm around her shoulders.

“Thanks.”

For a long time they sat quietly, just staring at the tiny cell, at the dirty straw on the floor and the functional, if disgusting, toilet in the corner.

“You know, they’re going to think it’s our fault,” she eventually whispered.

“I know.”

“I mean, if I hadn’t wanted to go back to that shop, and you hadn’t insisted on coming with me, we neither of us would be in this position.”

“Yeah.”

“Uncle Mal is going to be so cross.”

“Yeah.”

“And Daddy’s going to be mad, Mom is going to shout, and Auntie Frey -”

“Hey, my Ma is gonna understand.”

She looked up at him. “You think?”

“I know.” And he did. His mother certainly would understand. She’d known how he felt about Bethie since before he did.

“You should’ve knocked me out and dragged me back screaming.”

“If’n I’d knocked you out, you wouldn’t be able to scream,” he pointed out.

“Oh, yeah.” She chuckled, and it warmed his heart.

She snuggled closer, and other things began to warm.

Cold space. Think of the black. And freezing showers. Uncle Simon’s face.

“Where do you think they’re taking us?” she asked, unaware of his thoughts. Luckily, they’d agreed not to read each other when they hit puberty, more than uncomfortable about the random thoughts and feelings going through the other’s mind

Comments
Sunday, 23 November 2008 13:17
Loved this and loved Ethan being a big chip off his father's block. Very sweet and I love the implied notion that they will wait for each other rather than getting their experience through other means. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 23 November 2008 14:25
Sweet and fluffy and a nice change from watching hormones controlling brain function regardless of consequences. Nice of the family to have their own little army in case of trouble. And glad they were able to stop the slavers.
Sunday, 23 November 2008 14:56
Sounds like Ethan is the best of Mal and Frey. Fluffy and so sweet. I just love Bethie and Ethan together.
Sunday, 23 November 2008 19:17
"For a girl brought up on a transport ship with a crew possessing some of the highest libidos in ,the ‘verse,".I love this description, it brought a huge smile to my face. Poor Ethan and his raging hormones. I must say I like the mental processes he used to try and control them "Uncle Simon's face, Dad, the airlock" I am glad you took the time to let this piece develope. I also like the naturalness with which you place Simon at the rescue, gun in hand. I have always thought once he over came his Core bred reluctance to it he could in fact become rather good with one.

Thanks to all for your welcome back and your input on the new piece.

gentle journey,
twi
Monday, 24 November 2008 05:43
AWWWWW!!! I thought this was too cute. LOL!!

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