Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Ghost Stories

Friday, November 21, 2008

Technically Maya (just) but totally AU. I was having a bad day and needed to get this out of my head. Angst. And nothing to do with my other stories unless you squint. STANDALONE

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3754    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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They were all sitting around the table, telling ghost stories. So far, Kaylee’s had been voted the most effective, but that was because she did all the noises as well, although Mal’s was considered a close second, particularly as he swore it was true.

“Then how come you never told me about Abner?” Zoe asked. “All these years and I thought you’d walked through that minefield all by yourself.”

“Maybe because I wasn’t sure. Still ain’t. But it’s a damn good story, don’t you think?” He twinkled slightly at her.

“Hmnn.”

Then it was Hank’s turn, although his seemed to be more about hiding than actual ghosts as such.

Eventually there was only one member of the crew who hadn’t told a story.

“C’mon, moonbrain,” Jayne said, looking at his wife as she sat with her hands in her lap, her face half-hidden by her long dark hair. “You gotta have something.”

“Ghost stories …” She didn’t look up. “I don’t think I'm the right person to ask about ghost stories.”

“Oh?” Freya smiled. “Why’s that?”

“Because I see them all the time.” She finally lifted her head, and, as she knew it would, all the vibrant colour faded out of the warmly lit galley, her family becoming nothing more than dust dancing in the sharp light of Londinium. Her hair paled to white, and lines grew around her eyes and mouth. She touched the old tattoo around her ring finger. “All the time …” she repeated, her heart breaking.

-

Matthew Cobb stepped out of the groundcar and headed into the scrap yard. More than two dozen ships sat crowded in together, but none of them would ever fly again. He peered around.

“C’n I help you?” A young man came out of the low concrete building to the left of the entrance.

“I hope so. Someone called me. I'm Matthew Cobb.”

“Oh, yeah. I’m Harry Taylor.” He held out a hand and they shook. “Sorry about doing that, today of all days, but she’s back again.”

Matthew sighed. “I'm not surprised.”

“I mean, I know it’s the funeral and all, but I didn’t know what else to do. She’

Comments
Friday, 21 November 2008 18:10
Beautiful. Truly moving. I'll love it eternally.
Anna.x.(:
Friday, 21 November 2008 18:20
Oh.. my. Very well done. So beautiful.. I can see it so clearly, like a movie I have seen before.
Friday, 21 November 2008 22:50
Wow. Tender and beautiful, I loved that her grandson Matthew in the future would be the one to find her at her life's end and understand. Lucky the crew didn't know what she was seeing or it might have creeped them out. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 21 November 2008 23:03
Beautiful story. I think I have a tear in my eye.
Saturday, 22 November 2008 03:55
So very emotional. I just love how you ended it. Gorgeous!!
Saturday, 22 November 2008 04:19
What a beautiful way to bring a ghost story full circle. Now they'll always be together.
WOONSOCKET
Sunday, 23 November 2008 03:47
Wow. Just wow.
Saturday, 22 August 2009 14:49
I reread several folks' works on this site at least once a year, and yours is one of them. I always forget that this one is coming in the list, and it always makes me shed a tear, which is sometimes problematic to explain if I'm at work. I just wanted to let you know that your work is loved by at least one lurker out here, who rarely comments but always appreciates. Keep writing!(and if you know where Hotpoint is, thump him in the head and tell him to get back here).

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