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Prospero's Legacy - Part XXIV

Wednesday, November 5, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. River and Regan do hair, and Simon and Gabriel skirt the issue. NEW CHAPTER

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“You should have woken us,” Hank complained, turning enough in the pilot’s seat so he could look at the man standing behind him. “I could’ve done with a laugh.”

“Nothing to laugh at,” Mal chided. “Finding out there’s a madman looking for Simon ain’t exactly my idea of fun.” He’d updated the rest of the crew about Quintana’s desire to get hold of Simon at breakfast that morning.

“But we already knew someone was after him, sir,” Zoe said, perched on the edge of the console. “From what Theo said.”

“Oh, I agree. And we ain't no worse off than before by knowing who it is now.” Mal shook his head. “I just wish I’d had the chance to leave him and Kaylee someplace safe.”

“You know they’d never leave,” Hank pointed out.

“Yeah, but I’d’ve felt better for the argument.”

“You want an argument? I can oblige.” Hank ran a hand through his untidy brown hair.

Mal glared at his pilot. “I'm sure you can. Not so sure you can breathe vacuum without a suit, but …”

“Honey, is he threatening me?”

Zoe nodded. “Yes.”

“Oh. Fine. Just so I know.”

She looked back to Mal. “He is right, though. Simon wouldn’t have gone, nor Kaylee. But this does make me feel somewhat uncomfortable about the cargo we’re carrying.”

Mal nodded. “I know what you mean. Been feeling that way myself.” He took a deep breath, exhaling it heavily. “You know, Zoe, I feel like I’m being manipulated, having my strings pulled.”

“Sir?”

“They’re just leading me round, making me do what they want, and I’m just following their script.” He shook his head. “Alliance, New Browncoats … I don’t like it. I’d have more control if I had a ring through my nose – least then I could pull back on it.”

Hank stirred in his seat as if he really wanted to make some snarky comment, but luckily he refrained. Zoe’s boot on his foot might have had something to do with it.

“What do you suppose we’re actually carrying?” she asked.

“Don’t know, and neither did Patience. She said she never looked.”

“And you trust her?”

Comments
Wednesday, 05 November 2008 14:18
Loved this. Seeing River and Simon slowly regain some kind of relationship with their parents was great and I loved River making sure Regan knew that she would still protect her family on Serenity. I don't like all that equpiment boxed as cargo and fully agree with Jayne that they should just shove it out the airlock. Though I suppose hiding it on a lump of spinning rock until it is safe to do something else is not a bad alternative, just so long as they don't get caught with it. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
WOONSOCKET
Wednesday, 05 November 2008 16:46
Loved the pacing of the development of the relationships; these are difficult. And I think the plan for stashing the contraband is great. It's soooo embarassing to board a smuggler and not find anything illegal...
Wednesday, 05 November 2008 17:48
Have to agree with Amdobell and Woonsocket, Simon and River were so true to character andthe cargo needs to go, but it could be indespensible later...knowing how your stories go.
Wednesday, 05 November 2008 19:49
Great stuff here about the family dynamic just starting to function again. The plot is thicker with the equipment and as usual it could go many ways for the crew to solve this problem. Nice bit of fluff and angst combined. It may be exposition but it makes the characters turn into people you know and care about.
Wednesday, 05 November 2008 22:05
As usual all seems to have been said before I got here! Lol. Oh well, as everyone else has said I love that relationships are strengthening. Everyone needs as much family as possible.
Anna.x.(:

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