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Best Kept Secret

Thursday, October 30, 2008

Which of the crew has the best kept secret?

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Author: Gilove2dance

Title: The Best Kept Secret

Rayne_shippers October Chellenge

Prompt: “Best Kept Secret”...could it have been anything more Rayne related? I laughed my head off.

Disclaimer: Joss is bossWord

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Rating: G

A/N: Writin’ in an hour as I have no time thanks to midterms, assignments, essays, readings...why is university so bloody hard! Ai ya...

“Uh, Simon?” Wash sat down beside the doctor. “What are you doing?”

Simon jumped and almost cut himself. “I didn’t hear you come in,” he blushed and looked down at his work. “I’m whittling.”

“Did I know you could do that? Does anyone know you can do that?” Wash leaned over and picked up the rough piece of wood. A bird’s head was starting to emerge. “This is really good Simon. It seems you can carve more than just bullet out of injured people.”

“Thank you,” Simon smiled sheepishly. “Guess I just kept it secret because it’s not a skill that is of any importance out here in the black.”

“I guess you could say my dinos are my secret.” Wash chuckled at Simon’s look. “I know, I never could keep a secret.”

Simon nodded. “So now my secret’s out too.”

Wash patted his arm. “But yours is so neat!”

“What’s neat?” Mal came into the galley, followed by the rest of the crew. They sat in their respective seats at the table.

“Well, Simon secretly knows how to carve! Look at this.” Wash handed Mal the bird. “My secret was my dinos but—”

“Everyone knows ‘bout them, dear.” Zoe leaned into him, smiling.

“I know.” Wash smiled back, his eyes crinkling. “Now I’m wondering what secret everyone else is keeping.”

“I have no secrets,” chuckled Zoe.

“Well, you do, but only I know them.” Wash leaned in to kiss her.

“And let’s keep it that way,” Mal jumped in.

“I gotta a secret no one knows,” bounced Kaylee. She looked at Simon. “I know I shoulda told you firs’ and all but I can’t wait no more...it’s so shiny!”

Simon smiled happily. “Oh, boa bei. I know already.” He took her hand. “I am a

Comments
Thursday, 30 October 2008 10:16
hmmm would you like contstructive critisim or me to pick it apart to find something to compliment you on? It all depends on your mood lol...
Saturday, 01 November 2008 07:12
This made me smile, I think somewhere in the show, there might have been a scene like this - the dialogue was awsome!

Keep flying ;)
Wednesday, 05 November 2008 01:06
Am not into the whole Jayne/River thing I just can't see it. But for a moment I thought Jayne was gonna admit that he's gay or something. That would have been hilarious.
Wednesday, 05 November 2008 01:06
Am not into the whole Jayne/River thing I just can't see it. But for a moment I thought Jayne was gonna admit that he's gay or something. That would have been hilarious.

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