Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Cold

Thursday, October 23, 2008

Well, here it is. An attempt at Mal and Inara post BDM, after Serenity has been fixed, but before their first job.

I've also wondered about Inara's background and I basically took Moreana's comment that being a Companion was a "family business" and let my mind construct a back story.

Many thanks to Phyrelight and Taimdala for the Beta workd

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“I got what?” Mal said with a puzzled look on his face. His voice sounded like it had cycled through his nose once too often.

 

“A cold, an old fashioned cold,” Simon told his patient.

 

“I had plenty of gorram colds but nothing like this.  Don’t you have anything for this?”  Mal sneezed loudly.

 

“We still don't have the cure for the common cold.  There are too many viruses and they mutate too rapidly.  The best I can do is to give you an immune system booster but you’ll still be miserable for a day or two.”

 

“Guess it’s better than nothing.” Mal rolled up his sleeve to get ready for the innoc.

 

As Simon bent over Mal’s arm to give him the booster. Mal let out his biggest sneeze so far.

 

“I wish you'd turn your head when you sneezed. Oh, and by the way, you’ll have to stay in your bunk the rest of today. I don’t want the rest of the crew getting sick.”

 

“I’ve got captainy things to do.” Mal whined. “Got a meet up in two days on Verbena.  It'll be our first real job since Miranda. Gotta be better by then. Need the coin to keep this bucket in the sky”

“If you follow my orders, you'll be better tomorrow.  I’ll look in on you later on today and see how you’re doing.”

 

Mal sneezed again almost spraying the Doc.

 

“Just go... go  to your bunk!” Simon almost shouted, waving Mal away.  Simon turned toward the sink as Mal left the infirmary. Mal could hear Simon muttering to himself something about the infection rate of the common cold in a closed environment and caught a glimpse as Simon washed his hands up to his elbows and started to wipe down everything in the infirmary with disinfectant.

 

A few hours later Mal was in the half asleep state of the sick, when he heard someone coming down the steps.  From under his half-closed eyes Mal could see a female shape coming down the steps of the ladder into his bunk.

The shape crossed the room and stood next to Mal as he lay sprawled on his bed. A delicate hand felt his forehead, accidentally running her fingers through his b

Comments
Thursday, 23 October 2008 01:44
I liked your explanation of the family business very much. Poor Mal - not much experience in having a cold.
Thursday, 23 October 2008 07:47
Good start! And I mean for Mal and Inara. I hope they manage to say the things they really want to, without either of them getting in the way of their real feelings. Maybe when Inara comes down with the cold and Mal goes into her shuttle to minister to her ...
Thursday, 23 October 2008 07:50
Well done. I always love exposition into Inara's past. What we have for her backstory is so vague and ripe for many different and plausible takes on her pre-Firefly life and everyone has their own theories and takes. Loved it, especially the detail on what the proper procedure is for companion that becomes expectant on the job. It sounds completely plausible.
Thursday, 23 October 2008 11:58
Awsome! I really think you should keep writing this!! I saw an interview with Alan, Nate and Morena and she said something about a family business... I don't know if you saw it - Anyhow... well done!!!

Kim =)
Friday, 24 October 2008 03:12
Well done! I always enjoy your take on back stories! :)
Friday, 24 October 2008 21:07
Very nice! I loved the addition of the cold. Hundreds of years in the future and still no cure!! lol!
Sunday, 26 October 2008 04:31
This was beautiful, i love when fans create backstories for characters it's so interesting and like we get a second look into the verse...

It really was nicely written and a fantastic idea behind Inara...

!!

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