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Prospero's Legacy - Part XVIII

Friday, October 17, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Getting to the nitty gritty now, with Simon confronting his parents. NEW CHAPTER

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Chiang Goff backed out of the room, barely able to breathe. The door closed silently, until he was staring at the thick glass window in the featureless door.

“My God …” he whispered.

“So you’ve found our little secret.”

Goff span on his heel, coming face to face with Quintana, his tame security chief Ramsey hovering in the background. “You …” For a moment words wouldn’t come, held back by the shock.

“And you seem a little perturbed by it.”

“A little …” Goff swallowed. “Those things …” He pointed towards the door, his hand trembling slightly. “You were dismissed from the project for proposing just such abominations!”

“My dear Chiang, why don’t we go to my office? We can talk in comfort, and it honestly looks as if you need a stiff drink.” He reached out, taking hold of the other man’s arm. “I can explain it to you.”

Goff stared. “You think I’m going to condone this? And what about the rest of us? When were you planning on telling us?”

“I wasn’t,” Quintana confessed. “They would have the same reaction as you, for the most part. I was merely going to take this to its natural conclusion, and let my success speak for me.” He pulled gently. “A drink, Chiang. And all the explanations you need.”

“And what about the source? How did you –“

“Soon.” Emil Quintana smiled, his grey curls bobbing slightly as he urged Goff along the corridor, Ramsey falling in behind. “A glass of whisky and this will all seem so much better.”

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Simon almost ran over to the other ship, Mal following a little slower, favouring his arm and wondering if he should have taken the doc up on the offer of a sling. At least, he’d offered before Mal had told him about the Tams being on board Alex’s boat … now not even a bomb going off would have stopped him heading over there.

“What’s going on?” Freya asked, joining him, Dillon stopping to stand and stare from where he was supervising the collection of bodies. Jayne dumped the corpse he was carrying onto the wagon and followed them.

“I thi

Comments
Friday, 17 October 2008 17:38
Oh wow! I think I held my breath through this whole part! Excellently well done!
Friday, 17 October 2008 19:55
Simon's reaction was PERFECT! Although a little part of me wanted him to shoot like when he found out about Rayne ... :P I am so looking forward to more of this! :D
Anna.x.(:
WOONSOCKET
Friday, 17 October 2008 20:01
Argh!! Enough with the damn tenterhooks!!
What's the secret!!
Before the suspense kills me!!!
Nice work with Simon, btw...
Friday, 17 October 2008 22:00
Really fine piece of writing, everyone's reactions were spot-on. I like how, even being angry, River is in more control right now than her brother. Their parents needed to hear some home truths but also I agree with Kaylee that Simon should hear what they have to say before slamming the door shut on any future reconciliation. - Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 18 October 2008 00:36
Ah the perils of fathers and sons, difficult at the best of times, downright nasty at the worst. Well done!
Saturday, 18 October 2008 03:59
Kaylee's threat to Simon was so perfectly Kaylee! Really wondering at the next bombshell you're getting ready to drop. I could feel Simon's anger vibrating off the page - well done! Hope Kaylee can be the mediator and hope everyone has grown up a bit in the intervening years. Glad Mal is keeping a clear enough head to keep all the facts straight because I may have to go reread a few chapters to catch up again. Great story, looking forward to more.
Saturday, 18 October 2008 04:08
WOW! I loved Kaylee's threat at the end. It was very Kaylee and I love the way Simon and River argue. You would think by now, he would know she will always win. Great stuff!!!
BLKHERO69
Saturday, 18 October 2008 04:11
I like angry Simon. You took just enough polish off of him nicely. Didnt notice how closely I was leaning into my screen until I got to the 'to be continued...'
Saturday, 18 October 2008 14:03
Whew! You really know how to leave us hanging. And your Simon was just the right mixture of concern and anger.

And please let Gabriel get his information out before you do anything to him or Simon does something.
Sunday, 19 October 2008 22:47
Oh dear, the dying unreconciled dad would show up for the showdown. I suppose it's an opportunity for reconciliation. Or angst.

More please?

~freeverse
Monday, 20 October 2008 16:28
OMG Jane! I have been a lurker forever and have read all your stuff, never been into commenting, but this one made the hair on the back of my neck stand up! Can't wait to see where it goes. Hurry!!

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