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Prospero's Legacy - Part XVI

Friday, October 10, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. The cattle are stampeding, and Jayne and Mal are in the way. But there's more going on in the 'verse ... NEW CHAPTER

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Chiang Goff paused at the cross-junction, checking left and right before continuing straight ahead. He’d encountered hardly anyone, not even guards, and in a perverse way that piqued his interest more than anything. When Quintana had given him the tour, he’d specifically said this corridor led to deeper layers, but more unstable and liable to collapse.

“We wouldn’t want you walled up down there, would we?” Quintana had joked, but something in his manner had been a little off.

What was more odd, though, was the lack of security cameras. He’d had a hard time avoiding them on his way from the docking area, but then he hadn’t always been a Member of the Alliance Parliament, or even a politician, and the training he’d received as a young man had certainly come in handy. He was ready, and more than capable, of taking someone out if he needed, but he considered that grossly over the top. Perhaps it was these long dormant skills that were tickling his curiosity now, but he was sure Quintana was hiding something. And he was going to find out.

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Jayne watched in disbelief as the cattle raced towards them, and he felt his horse began to panic. It was only his quick reflexes, honed from years of shooting first, that kept him alive this time. Leaping for the fence next to him, he managed to catch hold, hooking one foot securely around an upright, before leaning down and grabbing the back of Mal’s shirt, hauling him to comparative safety as several thousand tonnes of beef on the hoof thundered past.

Mal clung to the rickety-feeling corral fence, exchanging a grateful look with the man who saved him, at the same time yelling angrily, “River!”

Little souls, big world.

What the diyu do you think you’re doing? It was amazing the amount of fury he could get into his thoughts.

Diversion? came the little voice back.

Did you have to turn us into hamburger to do it?

They won’t hurt you. They promised.

He raised a mental eyebrow, visualising what he was going to do to the

Comments
Friday, 10 October 2008 13:37
Whoa! Awesome addition! I am always so excited to read your fics!
Friday, 10 October 2008 15:29
Totally awesome!! I love the reaction of Gabriel to Jayne. Want to hear what he will say to River.
Friday, 10 October 2008 16:50

"Hello mother, hello father, here's the big mercenary I married." Can't wait to see what happens next.
Friday, 10 October 2008 18:41
What an intro to Jayne! Loved it! :D
Saturday, 11 October 2008 00:15
Jayne sure made himself useful in this fic - saving Mal, his in-laws, etc. Loved the action and the pacing in this. So much happened in a very brief time!
Saturday, 11 October 2008 00:46
I had to laugh at Jayne's introduction to River's parents. Just in the nick of time too! - Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
WOONSOCKET
Saturday, 11 October 2008 01:36
But Wait, Mal, Patience, and no bullet holes in Mal, at least that we know of...
Nice way to introduce Jayne to the in-laws.
And the cows promising(?) not to trample Jayne and Mal? rotflmao
Sunday, 12 October 2008 22:13
I've finally caught up on where you are from fanfiction.net! (It took me while longer than I'd thought it would - you 'verse is HUGE!) I am quite proud of how much I've read tho. When I started on your fireflyfans Jethro hadn't even been introduced, yet alone killed off, and Rayne was just a possible figment of the Maya 'Verse's imagination ...
That all being said, I'm so looking forward to the Tam's conversation with Simon. Something tells me he won't be so forgiving and/or friendly as River and Bethie have been ...
Anna.x.:D

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